avatarJennifer McDougall

Summary

The story revolves around a protagonist grappling with unsettling personal connections after receiving an origami crane that mirrors the exact blue of their grandmother's eyes, prompting a decision to investigate further or retreat to the familiar.

Abstract

In this ongoing adventure, the protagonist is overwhelmed by the personal significance of a simple origami crane. The crane's color is a poignant reminder of their Japanese grandfather (Ojīchan) and grandmother (O bāchan), evoking memories of Ojīchan's origami creations and O bāchan's eye color. This uncanny coincidence leaves the protagonist and their friend Gail pondering whether this is a sign from their ancestors, with the narrative reaching a pivotal moment as they decide whether to return to the McDonalds parking lot where the crane was found or to go home.

Opinions

  • The protagonist is deeply affected by the origami crane's color, suggesting it holds significant sentimental value.
  • Gail, the friend, is open to the idea of the origami being a supernatural message, indicating a belief in the possibility of communication from beyond.
  • The protagonist's fear and the description of the rotten sausages metaphorically convey a sense of dread and unease about the situation.
  • The story presents a crossroads, with options to either explore the unknown or seek safety, reflecting a theme of choices and their potential consequences.
  • The invitation to contribute to the story suggests a collaborative and interactive approach to storytelling, engaging readers in the narrative's progression.

#Ongoing Adventure: Drive Off Quickly

It’s getting way too personal

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“This isn’t right!” you shout almost hysterically, as Gail stares open-mouthed for long enough that she could catch a whole family of origami cockroaches.

“What’s not right?” she finally asks, patting your leg when she notices you shuddering worse than shingles in a hurricane. “WHAT’S NOT RIGHT?”

“How could they know?” She swerves out of the McDonalds’ parking lot while you’re trying desperately to understand what is going on. An invitation. A pink marshmallow. A double sausage and egg McMuffin. And now this, crumpled in your fist — a greasy cerulean blue origami crane.

“It’s getting too personal,” you finally whisper, sobbing into your own shirt. “How could they know that my Ojīchan always folded me origami cranes that were this exact shade of blue? The same sky-blue as my O bāchan’s eyes.”

“Freaky,” Gail finally adds. “But maybe it’s a sign?”

“Of what?” you ask, unable to dismiss the fear that blankets your belly and smells a little too much like rotten sausages discovered in the basement of a fire-ravaged home.

“Your Ojīchan and your O bāchan sending you a message! We have to go back to that parking lot!” She’s insistent and already turning onto a side street.

Options:

👉Agree to go back to the McDonalds.

👉 Refuse to go back — insist she takes you home.

👉 Ask her what she thinks you should do.

© Jennifer J. McDougall 2021

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