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Summary

A new story arc titled "Hunting a Demon" begins, featuring a hero embarking on a quest to save a child's father from a demon, with the narrative unfolding through 100-word or 200-word chapters.

Abstract

The narrative introduces a hero venturing into a dangerous valley known for its monsters, accompanied by a young girl named Angelika. The hero is determined to rescue Angelika's father from a demon, armed with new armor and an ornate shield. As they approach the great lake and its surrounding caves, the hero reassures Angelika of their commitment to the mission, despite the challenges ahead, including dealing with the potentially hostile fish-like locathah people. The story is part of a 'choose your own' adventure series, with readers able to influence the outcome through their choices.

Opinions

  • The author suggests that the journey ahead will be perilous but also an opportunity for the hero to secure fame.
  • The narrative implies that the hero feels a sense of responsibility to protect Angelika, recognizing her vulnerability and the importance of her safety.
  • The story hints at the complexity of the mission, with the need to navigate alliances with the locathah people to obtain crucial information.
  • The inclusion of a 'choose your own' story element indicates the author's interest in engaging readers directly in the unfolding events of the story.
  • The author uses vivid imagery to set the scene, emphasizing the beauty and danger of the environment, which serves as a backdrop for the hero's quest.

DRABBLE–ISH STORY ARC #6: Hunting a Demon

Into The Valley

A chapter of a ‘choose your own’ story

Image by the author with FreePik

This is the start of a new story, Hunting a Demon, written entirely in 100-word or 200-word chapters. Find out more about this kind of fiction stories here.

If you came here via another story, you can click to go back to: ‘An Adventurer’s Supplies’ by JF Danskin.

The sun is rising as you crest the hill. A great lake sits ahead, mountains all around.

Your new armor weighs you down, but you’re glad of it, and the beautiful ornate shield. The area is infamous for monsters.

A place where heroes secure their fame. Heroes like you, perhaps.

You glance back down the trail. The child Angelika is trailing behind, and you wait for a moment. She’s panting. “D’you really think we can save my father from the demon?” she asks, after catching her breath.

“I’ll do my best,” you vow. “But we need to find its weaknesses.”

She takes a drink. She carries her own backpack, and you’re struck by how small she is. She should be at home, safe with her family. Now, it’s down to you to take care of her.

You look at the lake. “Finnart lives here?”

She points at caves near the head of the lake. “There,” she says. “Somewhere. I don’t know which cave.”

The girl’s father was travelling with one of the fish-like locathah people. They’re a dangerous bunch, aggressive and touchy.

But perhaps with the child, you can get the information you need.

“Let’s find out,” you say.

Continue.

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