#OngoingAdventure: The Grammatical Errors
Chosen: using your finger, touch the notification to see if it opens up the message

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With the heat reaching an overwhelming point, you decide that somehow opening the message might be the solution to this sweaty mess. You didn’t want to utter “um, open notification” out loud because it seemed silly, so you went with the next best option: you treated the message like a touchscreen and booped it with your finger, decorated with your bee ring.
A quick high pitched notification sound whooshes past you as if a pigeon diving for its sausage from the hot dog in your hand, and you see the following message pop up:
This
sentence
contains
threee
erors
At first, you sigh in exasperation. This is getting nowhere to solving the fact that you’re now dripping in sweat in this oven of a melting place.
But there’s something about how puzzles appeal to you that cools you off from the inside. There’s a fire in you, but like, a cold fire.
You decide to participate.
The first two errors were easy. Clearly “threee” and “erors” were typos. But, as the initial sense of excitement wore off, you panic. You’re not sure what the third error is.
You’re also not even sure how to select the errors to let whoever was playing this cruel joke of a game show on your life.
“Wait, am I dead,” you gasp.
It would really explain why it’s so suddenly goddamn hot.
Options
- Figure out that the last error is that there is no period at the end of the sentence.
- Try to initiate the rules / FAQ by oddly whispering “help?” and “rules, please?” into the ether and hope some instructions for how to select the errors comes out.
- Investigate whether you’re actually dead?
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