avatarJennifer McDougall

Summary

The narrative describes a person's encounter with a mysterious glowing envelope that, upon opening, burns their wrist and leaves a bee tattoo, reminiscent of the wax seal on the envelope, evoking memories and a sense of wonder.

Abstract

Upon finding an ornately sealed, glowing envelope in their mailbox, the protagonist is reminded of a past college chemistry mishap. Ignoring potential danger, they open the envelope, which emits a moan and a honey-like substance that burns their wrist, leaving a bee tattoo matching the wax seal. The experience, while painless except for a slight headache, triggers memories of beeswax and royal jelly from their grandparents' honey harvesting trips. The scent of the apiary fills their nostrils, causing both nostalgia and apprehension. The protagonist is left uncertain about what to do next, faced with the weird yet slightly wonderful situation.

Opinions

  • The protagonist seems to have a nonchalant attitude towards potentially dangerous situations, as indicated by their lack of concern during the college chemistry incident and their decision to open the mysterious envelope.
  • The author uses vivid sensory descriptions, such as the scent of beeswax and the sound of a long moan from the envelope, to create an immersive and eerie atmosphere.
  • The protagonist's reaction to the supernatural event is one of curiosity rather than fear, suggesting a personality that is open to the extraordinary or a tendency to remain calm under unusual circumstances.
  • The presence of options at the end of the narrative implies that the story is interactive, allowing the reader to choose the protagonist's next action, which is a unique storytelling technique.
  • The mention of the author's name and the invitation to submit the next chapter suggest that this is part of a serialized fiction series that encourages reader participation.

#Ongoing Adventure: Open The Envelope

Some things just have to be investigated

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The envelope, stuffed through your mailbox without even a chip from its ornate wax seal, is glowing. Big deal. It reminds you a little of that science experiment gone wrong in college chemistry class. The one where an entire campus block had to be evacuated — but only one person was hospitalized and since it wasn’t you, your professor, or your lab partner, and it didn’t affect your grade, all seemed okay.

Yanking the burlap brown envelope from the recycling box you sink your incisors into the edge and slice it open. Rather than the scratchy hiss that you’re expecting a long moan bellows from inside the envelope. As the paper from within is flung towards the couch, a long, saliva-ish string of honey leaks out onto your wrist.

“Ouch,” you mutter, as the glob sizzles and burns your flesh. Staring as a wispy cloud of smoke dissipates, you notice that the tattoo of a bee has been scorched across the veins on your inner wrist. A bee that looks exactly like the one in the wax seal still intact on the envelope. “What the…?”

You’re not actually experiencing any pain, save for a slight headache at the very base of your skull. You remember the smell of beeswax and royal jelly from accompanying your grandparents on their pre-winter honey harvesting trips. That very scent has invaded your nostrils, reminding you of the apiary and its surrounding acres of clover, and also tingling you with a bit of apprehension.

This is just so weird and slightly wonderful that you aren’t sure what to do.

Options:

👉 Call a friend. 👉 See if the neighbors are home. 👉 Go to the hospital.

© Jennifer J. McDougall 2021

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