avatarBJ Dawson

Summary

"Love Asks Only" is a dizain-style poem that reflects on the tension and resolution within love, acknowledging its complexities and the commitment required to sustain it.

Abstract

The poem "Love Asks Only" delves into the intricate nature of love, likening it to a dish with tension and discord akin to undercooked beef. Despite the strife and red-faced anger that can mar love's purity, the poem suggests that laughter and a willingness to overlook can dissolve even insurmountable issues, rendering them inconsequential. The author, Barry Dawson Jr. IV, emphasizes that love is not about having all the answers but about the act of giving and being accountable to each other. This piece marks the author's first attempt at a dizain, a poetry form he discovered through Viraji Ogodapola's work, "Pipe Dreams."

Opinions

  • The poem conveys a belief that love, despite its challenges, is fundamentally about mutual giving and shared existence.
  • There is a sense of optimism that even in moments of conflict, love can prevail through humor and a resolve to move past disagreements.
  • The author expresses admiration for the dizain form and gratitude towards Viraji Ogodapola for introducing it to him.
  • The poem suggests that the true value of love lies in its resilience and the ability to forgive and find joy amidst dissonance.

Love Asks Only

A dizain on dissonance and devotion

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With tension rising and timbre displaced Love’s good faith tainted like undercooked beef With rancor tugging her corners, red-faced Scant twinkle behind her glare, a relief Cracking wise as we stare in disbelief Giggles dissolve the insurmountable Resolving our strife as discountable Beholden to us and the lives we live We live and love, with love accountable With few answers, love asks only to give.

Barry Dawson Jr. IV ~ 2021

This is my first tab at a dizain, a poetry form I discovered reading Viraji Ogodapola’s lovely poem, Pipe Dreams. Thanks for sharing this form with me, Viraji!

Other work from Barry:

Poetry
Dizains
Literary Impulse
Relationships
Love
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