avatarViraji Ogodapola

Summary

The web content presents a modern interpretation of a 15th-century French poetic form known as a dizain, exploring themes of urban life and existential contemplation, accompanied by a photograph and acknowledgments to various contributors and the Literary Impulse team.

Abstract

The website features a contemporary poem titled "Pipe Dreams," which is a dizain—a ten-line, ten-syllable poem with a specific rhyme scheme. The poem paints a vivid picture of the gritty and hopeful aspects of life, with imagery that evokes the sights and smells of city alleys. It reflects on the complexity of human emotions and the search for meaning amidst the mundane. The author, Viraji Ogodapola, expresses gratitude to William J Spirdione for encouragement and to Somsubhra Banerjee, Priyanka Srivastava, and the Literary Impulse team for their inspirational presence in the writing community. Additionally, the content invites readers to participate in exploring "Uncommon Poetic Forms," providing a link to further guidelines and information on Medium.

Opinions

  • The poem suggests a layered perspective on urban life, acknowledging both its harsh realities and the potential for beauty and hope.
  • The author conveys a sense of indebtedness to the individuals who have inspired and supported their poetic endeavors.
  • There is an underlying enthusiasm for the art of poetry, particularly in the context of the Literary Impulse community, which is credited with fostering a vibrant and engaging atmosphere for writers.
  • The inclusion of a photograph by Vince Gx complements the poem's themes, visually capturing the moody, introspective tone of the piece.
  • The invitation to readers to engage with uncommon poetic forms indicates a desire to encourage creativity and experimentation within the broader literary community.

Poetry

Pipe Dreams

A dizain from down the alleys

Photo by Vince Gx on Unsplash

Wayward thoughts and pungent smells soaking wet Sticking grunge, atop, under ‘n inside sacks Housing hopeful tomorrows not yet met Pelleting sun in bouts past callous cracks The day’s sighs of life on coarse measured tracks Ponder that rhyme and reason in spirits Obscured vision for the profound critics A song of the peripherals sans base Out of tune, to the rhyme of versed lyrics Symphony in silence, en route to ace

Viraji Ogodapola

  • Dizain — A form originating in 15th century France, the poem above is a ten line single stanza poem, with ten syllables per line, written with the rhyme sequence, ababbccdcd.
  • Presenting here with many thanks to William J Spirdione, without whose nudge I would not have thought of trying,
  • And with much gratitude to Somsubhra Banerjee, Priyanka Srivastava along with the rest of the Literary Impulse team for the exuberance they always bring about in the community with their presence!
  • The original prompt and guidelines for Uncommon Poetic Forms are as given below — do join in on the merriment!
Poetry
Dizains
Literary Impulse
Poetic Form
Poverty
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