avatarRalph Serpe

Summary

A tall man, fitting the description of a purse snatcher, is encountered in a convenience store, causing tension among the customers and staff, but he turns out to be harmless and even pays for a customer's apples.

Abstract

In the short story "Last Seen Near Willow Park," the tranquility of Mr. Cooper's convenience store is disrupted by a police announcement warning of a purse snatcher matching the description of a very tall man. The store's patrons, including an elderly woman named Mrs. Ladbury, react with apprehension when a man fitting the description enters the store. Despite the tension, the man shows kindness by returning a dropped apple to Mrs. Ladbury and offering to pay for her groceries. The story reaches a climax when Mr. Cooper, the store owner, confronts his fear and interacts with the tall man, who remains calm and courteous. The narrative concludes with a twist when an altercation outside the store reveals the tall man to be part of the Thompson family circus act, not the criminal from the police announcement.

Opinions

  • The author portrays the tall man as a misunderstood individual, challenging the initial suspicion cast upon him by the police announcement.
  • The community's fear and prejudice are highlighted through the collective tension and relief experienced by the store's occupants in response to the tall man's actions.
  • Mr. Cooper's nervousness and hesitation to confront the tall man reflect societal biases towards individuals who fit certain criminal profiles.
  • The story suggests that appearances can be deceiving, as the tall man's gentle demeanor contradicts the threatening image painted by the police.
  • The resolution of the story, with the revelation of the tall man's true identity, serves as a commentary on the importance of not judging a book by its cover.

FICTION — SHORT STORY

Last Seen Near Willow Park

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An old radio plays a classic from the 60s on a shelf behind Mr. Cooper in the convenience store. The music is interrupted by an announcement:

“This is Detective Bloomer, San Francisco Police. Be alert for a purse snatcher, a tall man, about seven feet, with short dark hair and a beard. He was last seen near Willow Park on Saturday night. If you see this man, do not approach him and call authorities immediately.”

The store, filled with the scent of stale coffee and burnt hot dogs, fell silent. All the customers, including a weary mother and an elderly man clutching his newspaper, turned towards the radio — everyone except Mrs. Ladbury. She was carefully selecting apples near the back of the store. Hard of hearing, she remained oblivious. She lost grip of an apple, and it rolled away, stopping at the feet of a very tall man by the hot cocoa machine.

He immediately picked it up and handed it to Mrs. Ladbury. “Here you are, ma’am,” he said, his voice soft and calm.

“Oh, thank you, young man. Such a dear,” she replied, smiling.

The man nodded and went back to fixing his hot cocoa. All eyes were on the giant as he fastened the lid on his cocoa and wiped the counter with a napkin. A collective tension was rising, broken only by two boys arguing over a chocolate bar in the candy aisle.

Mr. Cooper, shaking, picked up the phone. The tall man noticed and strolled toward the counter.

On the other end of the phone, “This is the San Francisco Police Department; how may I help you?” There was a pause. Mr. Cooper could not find the words as the giant towered over him, his eyes tense without an expression. “Hello?” They hung up. Mr. Cooper dropped the phone.

The tall man placed the hot cocoa on the counter with a pack of chewing gum.

Mr. Cooper, nervously, “Will that, umm, will that be all sir?”

“Yes. And I’d like to pay for the lovely ladies’ apples.”

The store occupants sighed with relief as the goliath exited the store.

An altercation broke out in front of the store a few hours later. A very tall figure was attempting to steal an old lady’s purse. Seeing the altercation unfold, Mr. Cooper hid behind the counter. The old lady fought back and would not let go. The figure stumbled and crashed onto the pavement, spilling out Mr. Thompson, Mrs. Thompson, and little Jared Thompson.

They run a local circus act, and times are tough.

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