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Summary

A woman reflects on her tumultuous marriage, where her infidelity leads to her husband imprisoning her, yet she ponders if her flaws contribute to his beastly behavior and questions the nature of their commitment.

Abstract

The narrative "Imprisoned by a Beast, my own Husband!" is a piece of micro fiction that delves into the complex dynamics of a marriage marred by domestic abuse and imprisonment. The protagonist, a flawed woman who admits to her own transgressions, grapples with the consequences of her actions—namely, being caged by her husband, Digger, after she cheats on him. Despite recognizing her husband's abusive behavior, she also reflects on her role in the relationship's downfall, suggesting that her imperfections might be the catalyst for his beastly conduct. The story, while acknowledging the wrongs on both sides, ultimately underscores the enduring nature of their bond, as they remain committed to each other "for better or worse," hinting at a deeper, albeit troubled, love.

Opinions

  • The protagonist acknowledges her own faults and the impact of her infidelity on her husband's behavior.
  • There is a sense of self-blame as she questions whether her flaws justify her husband's abusive actions.
  • The protagonist perceives her husband's decision to imprison her rather than leave her as a twisted form of commitment and financial provision.
  • Despite the abuse, there is a resignation to the idea that their marriage is a long-term commitment, suggesting a complex understanding of love.
  • The story implies that both parties are at fault and that their relationship is defined by mutual dysfunction as much as by love.

Micro Fiction

Imprisoned by a Beast, my own Husband!

I ain’t no princess: If I wasn’t so flawed, perhaps he wouldn’t be so beastly?

Image by Leandro De Carvalho from Pixabay

This short is a stand-alone story, but also a spin-off to a series I am writing on Redemption Magazine about a woman in a cage. Read the first episode here…

Being in this cage has certainly got me thinking. I’m a selfish bitch at times and don’t stop to wonder if the things I do will hurt my husband.

Don’t get me wrong, Digger is an absolute bastard for imprisoning me like this. Taking away my freedom because I shagged some geezer down the boozer. For slapping me about and locking me up as punishment.

But I ain’t no princess.

He stuck me in this cage instead of telling me to pack my bags and get the fuck out. He’s the one who puts bread on our table. Perhaps it’s only right I should repay him? Be a good wife and not answer him back or suck off the locals!

If I wasn’t so flawed, perhaps he wouldn’t be so beastly?

The one thing I do know is, we may rant about how the other behaves, but we’re both in this for the long term — for better or worse — cause that’s what love is all about.

The above tale is under 200 word flash fiction for this prompt

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