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Summary

In a fictional scenario, a character named Jermaine presents four uniquely crafted torture instruments to his captives, offering them a choice in the order of their torment, while also requiring them to read honorable mentions.

Abstract

The narrative titled "Four Challenging Horsemen" unfolds with Jermaine, a character who introduces a group of bound captives to a set of four exquisitely designed torture instruments. These instruments, each created by a different artist, are named DEATH, REENTRY, WORK, and SPACE. Despite the grim setting, Jermaine is in a good mood and decides to grant his captives a semblance of control by allowing them to choose the order in which they will experience the torture. This choice comes with a caveat: they must also read the honorable mentions, a condition set by the Boss, referred to as Ev. The story is a work of fiction, a response to an unexpected writing prompt, and emphasizes that the captives will eventually endure all four forms of torture regardless of their choice. The narrative concludes with links to other works of fiction and an invitation to write for a publication called Microcosm.

Opinions

  • Jermaine takes pride in the quality and craftsmanship of the torture instruments, considering them a bargain despite their high cost.
  • The instruments are intentionally designed to be rough and non-shiny, reflecting a deliberate aesthetic choice that aligns with their purpose.
  • Jermaine's offer to let the captives choose the order of their torture suggests a sadistic generosity, though this is tempered by the requirement to read the honorable mentions.
  • The Boss, Ev, has the final say in the conditions imposed on the captives, indicating a hierarchy in the power dynamics of the narrative.
  • The story is presented as entirely fictional, with any resemblance to real persons, events, or challenges being purely coincidental.

Four Challenging Horsemen

Fifteen minutes can be a very long time

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“Now that you’re all tied up to your chairs, we’ll proceed with the torture.”

Jermaine opened the newly illustrated torture box. He had commissioned four different artists, one for each side, and the result was dazzling. His four instruments lay on the dark velvet, waiting for their public.

He knew to the cent how much these new exquisite toys had cost. He also knew it was a bargain. He would have paid much more for such quality of torture. So much more. They were handmade and crafted with care over many years, materializing twisted minds’ eerie thoughts. True nectars.

They weren’t shiny.

They were rough on the edges.

And it was all on purpose.

“I’m in a good mood today. I’ll give you a choice. I’ve got four instruments for you to choose from. They’re named DEATH, REENTRY, WORK, and SPACE. Don’t get me wrong. You’ll have to experience the four of them; to the last letter. But you’ve got a say as to the order.”

Maybe I’m too generous, thought Jermaine. I should check with the Boss.

“Ev! Is that ok if they have the choice of the order?”

“Under one condition, Jermaine. They have to read the honorable mentions as well.”

This is a work of fiction in response to this unexpected prompt. Any similarity to actual persons, living or dead, actual writers’ challenges, ongoing or closed, or actual events, is purely coincidental.

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