avatarMonoreena Acharjee Majumdar

Summary

The website content is a poetic exploration of the creative potential within brain fog, presented as a response to a writing prompt about "clouds" for the "Déjà Vu at Paper Poetry" series.

Abstract

The text presents a poem titled "When You Woman…" which metaphorically describes the experience of embracing one's femininity amidst the haze of brain fog. The poem paints a vivid picture of strength, resilience, and sensory perception, likening the feeling to natural elements such as clay, mud, and water. It suggests that the foggy mind can lead to a heightened state of creativity, allowing one to perceive the world in a unique and profound way. The author, inspired by the concept of "cloud," uses this theme to reflect on the enigmatic nature of the cosmos and the depth of human emotion. The piece concludes with a note of gratitude to Carolyn Hastings for the creative prompt and to the community of Paper Poetry for fostering an environment where creativity thrives.

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  • The author views brain fog not as a hindrance but as a catalyst for creative thought, suggesting it can lead to a deeper, more imaginative perspective.
  • The poem conveys a sense of empowerment and inner fortitude, emphasizing the inherent strength of womanhood.
  • The imagery used in the poem reflects a connection between the abstract nature of brain fog and the tangible beauty of the natural world.
  • The author expresses appreciation for the Paper Poetry community and the collaborative nature of creative inspiration, particularly highlighting the influence of Carolyn Hastings' prompt on the theme of "cloud."
  • The piece suggests that embracing the ambiguity and uncertainty of brain fog can lead to a richer understanding of oneself and the universe.

Deja Vu at Paper Poetry

When You Woman…

Journaling creative quirks of brain fog

Canva Created Artwork by Monoreena

“I felt a catch in my chest and a pulsing in my ears and then I felt calm and numb, with a fuzziness that I couldn’t think through, much thicker than before.” ― Olga Trujillo

When you decide to Woman, In your blurred, amorphous existence —

You unleash that strength invisible, The sword that hangs from the flesh, shining even in the dark, The fire however veiled, still burning the heart, Drizzling photo negatives falling in thin strips, Mingling with your soma,

They occur in a splash, Grips you unaware —

Making you come alive In a way that you smell deluge in the cloud, See the moon peeping behind the afternoon sun, Envision vapour twirling with the wind, You become the eye to the cosmic undiscerned,

Hard as clay Soft as mud…….

Flying on wing-manifests of bookmark feathers, Lazying on gravity-defying air stream,

You know a few drops of rain are to die for — Yet, you move to float on that river like a lone autumn leaf, Catching breath on the way to the undisclosed, You swirl on Adam’s ale leaning on your base, The base you carry within —

Hard as clay Soft as mud…..

Bubble wrapped in air Pop-splitting with every breath,

No. You cannot see. As the wonders of the cosmic arrangement lies between the lines…

When you woman — You just need a few pearls from mountain feet, Touching the sleeping sage, But the ocean withdraws…. You walk on aqua cleared salty earth that pricks… That tastes of honeyed pain , That longs to wake up to the call of the wild,

You vacuum the cerulean canopy of its stars, the moon, the sun, Let life dance, tapping the soft mud, Embossing your footprint on hardened clay, ‘Till time sends its receipt —

When you woman…..

Author’s Note:Thought of giving brain fog a positive twist, as most of my creative endeavours are a result of my fuzzy brain. You see, when you can’t think straight, you think creative!

Thank you Carolyn Hastings for your thoughtful tag to the topic of brain fog clouds-of-confusion — a response to the Week 4 prompt: cloud for Déjà Vu at Paper Poetry.

Thank you Carolyn Hastings Suntonu Bhadra Indubala Kachhawa for Paper Poetry, an amazing space for thriving creativity.

Thank you everyone for your kind visit. Your engaging and inspiring is much appreciated!

Poetry
Brain Fog
Deja Vu At Paper Poetry
W4 Prompt
Cloud
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