avatarSujit Chakraborty

Summary

The poem "Wheel of Relationship" on Medium reflects on a relationship stalled by external circumstances and internal hesitations, where both parties wait for the other to take the initiative to rekindle their connection.

Abstract

The poem describes a scenario where a couple chooses to stay indoors due to heavy snowstorms, using the weather as a metaphor for their reluctance to actively improve their relationship, which is metaphorically represented as a wheel that needs to be kept moving. The snowflakes symbolize the barriers that have caused them to lose warmth and connection. The poem suggests that both individuals expect the other to make the first move, leading to a stalemate where self-neglect prevails. The closing of the poem acknowledges the reader's support for "The Scriber’s Nook" and invites them to explore more writing through a link to another article.

Opinions

  • The poem conveys a sense of mutual procrastination in a relationship, where both parties are passive and expect the other to initiate efforts to improve their situation.
  • The author implies that the coldness in the relationship is a result of both individuals' inactions, which has led to a loss of warmth and connection.
  • There is a sense of isolation and loneliness depicted, as the couple seems to be living separate lives despite their physical proximity.
  • The poem suggests that individuals in a relationship can become so focused on the other person's actions that they neglect their own needs and contributions to the relationship.
  • The acknowledgment at the end of the poem expresses gratitude for the readers' engagement with "The Scriber’s Nook," indicating a community aspect to the writing and a desire to continue sharing content with a dedicated audience.

POETRY ON MEDIUM

Wheel of Relationship

BREAKING THE ICE

Photo by Rinke Dohmen on Unsplash

Heavy snowstorms outside

was the only reason why

we decided to stay inside

Neither of us was much

interested in breaking the ice

which was badly needed to

keep the wheel of our relationship moving

Wheels were getting covered

by wild snowflakes falling free

We had lost our warmth

It looks like a never-ending cold

Everyone expects an invitation

to come only from the other half!

Thus we forget about ourselves

And live alone here forever

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