Feedback Request from ILLUMINATION writers
What is wrong with talking about magnesium and pain?
Struggling to understand what is important for Medium readers
“The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.” ― Rob Siltanen
“One day everything will be well, that is our hope. Everything’s fine today, that is our illusion” ― Voltaire
“It’s my duty as a human being to be pissed off” ― Eric Bogosian
Feedback is essential for growth.
Feedback is critical for writers.
Feedback is invaluable in every profession.
I love writing about my experience and sharing important messages.
Writing and sharing have always been passion for me.
In this article, I want to discuss an article close to my heart.
The pure intention of the article was to share my personal experience supported by science. I attached it below for your reference.
The experience mentioned in the article made a substantial positive impact on my health. Therefore, my aim was to pass on the message to a wider audience so that many other people can benefit from this experience. I introduced a natural substance and some practical tips to use it.
By following the Medium curation guidelines, I submitted the article with no ads or clutter. I did not use the term Medium and did not tag anyone. More importantly, the article received excellent feedback with many claps from my readers. Even some well known health professionals endorsed it. I also had fantastic feedback from many professionals on LinkedIn.
However, Medium curators did not distribute it to the topics for unknown reasons. I am wondering why. What did I do wrong in this specific article? Or was there something wrong with my message? Did the article misguide people? Was it too personal? Did it give harm to society? Was there any harassment in the content? Was the title click-bait? Was the cover photo too aggressive, offensive, or misleading? I keep asking these questions but cannot find a convincing answer. Therefore, I need your help.
Since there is no feedback mechanism from curators and I am a person who strives for excellence and wants to improve his writing and content marketing, I want to invite my readers to provide me honest feedback on what is wrong in this article prevented it being distributed to the topics on Medium.
Please be as brutal as possible in your feedback. You can’t offend me, I enjoy and value negative feedback too. I’d appreciate your comments on what is missing or what it is too much to prevent it from distribution.
I truly want to improve my writing skills and want messages to reach out to a wider audience. Since you are all creative writers on ILLUMINATION, I value your feedback. We are here to help and support each other to grow and become successful in our writing practice.
Here is the article for your review.
As a second concern, I read another insightful article from Dr Rick Dobson submitted to ILLUMINATION earlier today. I was hoping it would be distributed to topics so that many painful people gain insights from this authoritative and articulated content.
However, Medium curators did not distribute it either. I am disappointed.
I know most of you asking, what is the silver-lining as our writers like this concept. My silver-lining is the power of our community.
We have a collaborative community who can amplify important messages that can be useful for many suffering people. I am pleased that our editors featured this great article on ILLUMINATION today. Let’s enjoy!
From the hindsight, I should have made my article more compelling with some chewing gum stories, but it could have been out of my writing style and definitely outside of my character. Sometimes I regret being too serious, which could be a disadvantage. What do you think? Or, perhaps should I add more colorful vernacular like Julia E Hubbel articulated as a response to my reaction of her great points. But I am not ripped and not 67 yet.
