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Summary

The website content is a reflective essay on poetry, specifically an open form poem titled "Waiting for the Perfect Moment," which was inspired by another poem and encourages a chain of poetic creation among writers on the Medium platform.

Abstract

The essay discusses the concept of open form poetry, using the metaphor of space and moments to describe the experience of waiting for the perfect moment to capture a photograph or to write. It emphasizes the value of space and the energy within it, suggesting that slowing down is essential to recognize these moments and the essence of life. The author recounts a personal experience in South Africa, where the act of waiting for the perfect sunset shot led to a transformative holiday and the realization of a new identity as a writer. The essay also acknowledges the influence of other writers, such as Ravyne Hawke and Martin Rushton, and invites ten other writers to continue the poetic chain using the prompt "SEED." The author's intention is to foster a supportive community of writers and readers on Medium, highlighting the power of connection and the impact of small nudges that can lead to significant creative output.

Opinions

  • The author values the concept of open form poetry as a continuous and evolving creative process.
  • Space is personified as an underrated entity full of vibrant energy and is considered fiercely fragile.
  • Moments are treasured as nudges in life, prompting one to step off their path or clear tangles.
  • The act of slowing down is crucial for recognizing meaningful moments and the essence of life.
  • The author reflects on a personal journey of self-discovery and transformation through solo travel and writing.
  • The essay expresses admiration for the work of Martin Rushton and the positive influence of the writing community on Medium.
  • The author believes in the power of a single prompt to inspire an avalanche of creative work, b

Poetry

Waiting for the Perfect Moment

Open form poetry — the never-ending poem

Sunset in South Africa. Waiting for the perfect moment when the sun illuminates the boat. Picture by author.

Moments are solidified liquid floating in space.

The space is the waiting for a next perfect moment.

Space is underrated.

It’s full of vibrant energy, going this way and that.

A silent dance of atoms and ions, bouncing, bumping, never still.

Space is vast.

Space is valuable.

Space is fiercely fragile.

The moments are treasures to be treasured for real.

Nudges in our lives to step off our path or clear the tangles.

Space is the silent observer.

Slowing down is the only way to recognize moments and space.

To recognize life.

Sunset. I remembered the time when I was waiting for the perfect photography shot in South Africa.

For the first time traveling alone. The first time I called myself a writer when people asked why I was traveling alone. It was a life-changing holiday.

Me, myself and I.

Here’s another picture, made on the same day, when I’m still waiting for the perfect moment to arrive.

Sunset. The boat has not reached the sun yet. Picture by author.

And now I’m writing poetry. Who’d have thought?

This poem came into being after a nudge by Ravyne Hawke in her intense poem Burning Memories.

The prompt was sunset.

Apparently, Martin Rushton started the never-ending poem. I didn’t know him before I was mentioned, but now I like to read his work. It’s why I like connecting on this platform.

One little nudge starts an avalanche. The positive kind where people become buried in hugs and support. Our reading and writing light up lives.

So here are my ten incredible writers whom I’m inviting to publish their poem anywhere on Medium using my prompt. I’m not sure if you’ve been tagged in this chain before. Might be. So feel free to write or decline.

Martine Weber, Kaitlyn, Keno Ogbo, Chirag, Trista Ainsworth, Agnes Louis, Charlotte Zobeir Ali, FILZA CHAUDHRY, Hope Coalesce, Sana Rose.

Your prompt is SEED. Keep it going and tag 10 of your favorite writers and create a different prompt. Tag me too and include the original never-ending poem in your post.

If you want to connect, you can find me on LinkedIn, Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, Pinterest, or my website. Or somewhere waiting, feeling space and capturing moments in time…

Further reading

Poetry
Perfectionism
Life
Self
Life Lessons
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