avatarSherry Atkinson

Summary

Two young angels accidentally drop a lemon slice into the moon while cleaning, creating the illusion of a waning crescent moon, and the narrative playfully suggests that this celestial feature is a sign of their guardianship and presence.

Abstract

The story unfolds on a starry night where two angels, tasked with watching over children, find themselves relaxing on a cloud. As they enjoy their tea, the angels, who are not particularly tidy, end up making a mess with honey. In their rush to clean up before dawn, they accidentally drop a lemon slice into the moon, which becomes wedged in the crescent shape. The angels decide to leave it there, and this whimsical tale proposes that the lemon-shaped waning crescent moon is a monthly reminder of the angels' constant vigilance and their close proximity when we need them most. The author, inspired by a real-life sighting of the moon resembling a lemon slice, uses Bing Image Creator and Canva to recreate the vision and pens a poem to capture the enchanting moment, despite acknowledging the poem's imperfections. The narrative ends with a thank you to Trisha Faye and a promotion of the Good Vibes Club, inviting others to contribute joyful and positive content.

Opinions

  • The author finds humor and charm in the idea of angels being responsible for the moon's appearance.
  • The angels' untidiness is portrayed in an endearing way, contributing to the story's whimsy.
  • The narrative conveys a sense of wonder and imagination, transforming an everyday occurrence into a magical event.
  • The author expresses gratitude towards Trisha Faye and the Good Vibes Club for fostering a community centered around positivity and joy.
  • The story is written with a playful tone, emphasizing the fun and creativity of the writing process.
  • The author encourages readers to engage with the Good Vibes Club by contributing their own stories, indicating a belief in the value of shared positivity.

The Story of the Waning Crescent Moon

Two untidy angels engage in a cover-up

Images were created using Bing Image Creator and edited in Canva.

In the wee hours of a star-sprinkled night, High in the sky on a comfy white cloud, Sat two angels, drinking tea before flight. Guardians, they were and had to take a vow

To watch over babies, toddlers, and kids. They were young angels, therefore, last in line, To choose charges and children were last bid. Blind to danger, they take up lots of time.

So while children slept all snuggled in bed, The two angels breathed a sigh of relief. At daybreak, trouble is always ahead. They sipped lemon tea with honey for sweet.

They were not the tidiest Seraphim. The nice cloud was soon sticky with honey. And though they were a great guardian team, Archangels did not find such mess funny.

That night the girls really worked to clean up. In haste, one dropped a plate and silver spoon. The other sweeping too hard broke a cup, And dropped a lemon slice into the moon.

They tried hard but could not retrieve the slice. It was wedged tightly in the crescent moon. “What luck!” they cried. “Look the slice fits quite nice!” We’ll leave it there. The full moon will come soon.”

Now, you see moon’s lemon waning crescent, Once a month, high in a starry night sky. A sign that angels are always present, And just when we need them, they are close by.

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One night this past week, I looked up at the moon and thought it looked exactly like a lemon slice. I tried to capture the sight with my iPhone but couldn’t get a sharp photo. As I went to sleep that night, I kept seeing that lemon-yellow moon. Upon waking, I began to toy with Bing Image Creator to see if I could reproduce that enchanting vision. After multiple prompts, I achieved an almost perfect recreation of what I saw through the trees beside my house. Throughout the day, a story started meandering through my thoughts about angels having tea and dropping the lemon slice. This is not my best poem by any means, but I had fun writing it, and hopefully, you will have fun reading it despite its foibles!

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Thank you, Trisha Faye, for making me feel welcome at Good Vibes Club! This publication lives up to her goal of promoting joy and positivity. Check it out! If you would like to spread some joy and positivity yourself, Trisha tells you how to become a writer for Good Vibes Club here:

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