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Summary

"The Raven" is a piece of 100-word flash fiction depicting a dominant woman in a BDSM scenario with her new submissive.

Abstract

The narrative "The Raven" is a succinct flash fiction piece that vividly portrays a dominatrix, referred to as "The Raven," and her interactions with her new submissive. The story unfolds in a setting where The Raven, clad in a rubber cat suit and adorned with long raven hair, exerts her dominance over her submissive, who is positioned at her feet. She wields a dragon tail whip, and with each strike, the submissive expresses gratitude. The climax of the story introduces a surprise in the form of a double-ended strap-on, which intensifies the encounter, leading to a moment of shared excitement and a physical release for The Raven. The session concludes with a shower, and there is an implication that the submissive will return for more experiences with The Raven. The website also provides links to related works by the same author and information on potential opportunities for writers to monetize their flash fiction.

Opinions

  • The author seems to celebrate the dynamics of power and consent within a BDSM context, highlighting the submissive's enjoyment and willingness to participate.
  • The use of vivid imagery, such as the rubber cat suit and dragon tail whip, suggests a fascination with the aesthetics of the dominatrix archetype.
  • The inclusion of a double-ended strap-on as a surprise element indicates a theme of exploration and the potential for mutual pleasure within a dominant-submissive relationship.
  • The story implies an appreciation for brevity and the ability of flash fiction to convey a complete narrative arc within a constrained word count.
  • By providing links to other works and discussing opportunities for writers, the author or the platform demonstrates support for the flash fiction writing community and its growth.
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MICRO MONDAY, 100 Word Flash Fiction

The Raven

The Raven has a Surprise for her new Sub

She stood tall in her rubber cat suit, long raven hair down her back and a new slave at her feet.

She swung her dragon tail whip. Every time it hit him he thanked her.

She had a surprise for her slave, it was a large double ended strap-on. The motion of the dildo inside them both built excitement very quickly.

She dug her long red nails into his back, and rode him hard until she exploded over her cat suit. Then, she pulled out of him and they showered.

She knew her slave would be back again soon.

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