avatarJacinta Palmer

Summary

Madge and Ronnie, winners of a dance marathon in Chicago, navigate the complexities of their partnership and the prospect of pretending to be married for future competitions, while dealing with personal aspirations and the realities of the Great Depression.

Abstract

In the midst of the Great Depression, Madge and Ronnie, recent winners of a dance marathon, face the challenges of their newfound partnership. As they prepare for their next competition at White City Amusement Park, they grapple with the requirement to present themselves as a married couple, a pretense that weighs heavily on Madge. Despite their physical exhaustion and the strain of maintaining their secret, they share a growing affection and mutual respect. Over a meal at their local diner, they discuss their future, with Ronnie expressing a desire to settle in Chicago and continue their dance partnership, hinting at the possibility of making their fake marriage a reality. The story, inspired by a photograph of the author's Great Aunt, delves into themes of identity, societal expectations, and the pursuit of dreams during difficult times.

Opinions

  • Madge is conflicted about pretending to be married to Ronnie, despite their successful dance partnership.
  • Ronnie is open to the idea of staying in Chicago and potentially turning their fake marriage into a real one.
  • The author suggests that Madge and Ronnie's relationship has potential for genuine romance, as indicated by their shared laughter and Madge's inability to hide her grin.
  • The narrative implies that both characters are considering the practicalities of their situation, including employment and the social advantages of being perceived as a married couple.
  • The story reflects the economic hardships of the era, with references to the Great Depression and the characters' need to win dance competitions for financial gain.
  • The author uses the characters' interactions and internal thoughts to build tension and anticipation for their decision regarding their partnership and fake marriage.
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The Dance Contest — Next Steps

Madge and Ronnie had to keep a secret for propriety in order to take part in a dance marathon in Chicago

Madge felt she could sleep for days, and perhaps she would’ve if she lived somewhere else; instead she was brought rudely to wakefulness by the clanking sound of the plumbing, protesting at her neighbours’ requirement for water with which to flush, shave, bathe and cook. All around her, apartment doors were opening and closing, feet clattered on the winding staircase. The street door slammed frequently as those living hugger mugger, having made their morning ablutions, set off to work.

She threw an arm over her face, shielding her eyes from light streaming in through her narrow window, but even that limb felt leaden. Madge’s legs were worse, her knee and hip joints screamed from overuse while her feet were throbbing as insistently as when she’d slipped off her dancing shoes the night before.

But we won! She reminded herself, then rolled over stiffly to check the money was still stashed safely under her mattress, folded into her winter muffler.

Now she was wide awake her mind began gnawing at the problem of their next competition, White City Amusement Park was a step up, but pretending to be married — that didn’t sit easily with her. Ronnie was a dreamboat, for sure, but what did she really know about him except that he came from Cleveland?

They were meeting at the diner for lunch, she could put him through the hoops then, find out his intentions and prospects. Pulling the thin blanket over her head, Madge was determined to grab another hour of rest now the building was more or less empty and the water tank was silent.

Yeah he was cute. Madge smiled at Ronnie as he approached her and slid into the booth.

“Morning,” he smiled, acting as bashful as she felt.

Strange, they’d danced together for nearly four days. Pretending they were a couple, they’d held each other close, offering support to one another when exhaustion made their feet throb and their limbs sag like cooked spaghetti. Now they were giving each other sidelong glances and Madge wore a grin on her face she couldn’t wipe off.

“What can I get you?” Their waitress looked listless, her apron bore a splash of gravy from today’s special Irish Stew.

Ronnie looked expectantly at Madge, ladies first his eyes said, and she awarded him points for politeness.

“A plate of the stew please.”

“You want that with potatos or cornbread?”

She chose potato, mopping up sauce with bread seemed unladylike, and she wanted Ronnie to think of her as a lady.

Ronnie ordered the same, but with bread and collard greens.

“Coffee?” the waitress asked, and when they assented, she brought them large white cups which she filled to the brim.

Adding creamer and sugar, Madge found sipping at the hot drink revived her. It also gave her a chance to study Ronnie, to notice the velvet depths of his brown eyes and a cheek dimple when he smiled.

“So — what next?” she asked.

“Find a job I guess,” Ronald shrugged.

“What do you do?”

“I was training to be a butcher,” his eyes flicked to hers, gauging her reaction.

“So you’re planning to stay?”

“Why not? We’re good together, we got another competition coming up. We could make a go of this.”

He lowered his cup, leaning back as the waitress set wide brimmed bowls in front of them. The rich gravy steamed and settled round slow cooked carrots, beef and onions. Madge’s stomach growled loudly, and both of them laughed.

“So you plan to stay in Chicago?” she asked once she’d swallowed a few mouthfuls.

“Sure,” he nodded, “Can’t exactly travel back and forth.”

“What about what the promoter said — better if we were married?”

Ronnie chewed his mouthful maddeningly slowly, while Madge’s toes curled in her shoes. Finally he raised his eyes to hers, dark brown meeting green with gold flecks.

“That wouldn’t be so bad.”

Her stomach gave a swoop worthy of a ride on the big dipper.

This fiction was inspired by a studio photograph I recently found of my Great Aunt. My friend Ted wrote a prequel to this on his blog

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