avatarVal Francis

Summary

A man contemplates the poetic justice of his suicide as a means to inflict lifelong guilt and suffering on his friend and wife who betrayed him.

Abstract

The narrative centers on a man who, after discovering his wife's affair with his friend, decides to hang himself as a form of retribution. He reflects on his previous life of luxury and the betrayal that led to his decision. The man seeks a punishment that will make his wife and friend suffer more profoundly than a simple act of violence, choosing a method that will leave them with a lifetime of guilt. As he prepares to end his life, he ensures they are watching, believing this will be the ultimate punishment. In a final twist, it is revealed that his friend, rather than saving him, hastens his death by kicking away the stool, adding an unexpected layer to the narrative of betrayal and justice.

Opinions

  • The protagonist believes that his suicide will serve as a more impactful and lasting form of punishment for the betrayal he experienced, compared to the immediate finality of murder.
  • He perceives his life before the betrayal as one of material success and social status, symbolized by his "flash car, big house, trophy wife."
  • The man harbors deep regret and bitterness, particularly towards his friend, whom he feels has stolen his "property," referring to his wife.
  • He is convinced that witnessing his death will cause his wife and friend to suffer from guilt for the rest of their lives, suggesting a desire for emotional revenge.
  • The protagonist's decision to hang himself is calculated and premeditated, designed to maximize the emotional impact on the betrayers.
  • The unexpected action of the friend in kicking away the stool introduces a complex dynamic to the story, leaving the reader to question the friend's true intentions and the nature of their relationship.

Poetic Justice

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Odd how hanging yourself changes perspective.

I had everything.

Flash car, big house, trophy wife.

What more could a guy want?

Did I love and seduce her to stop him from having her?

I was the better choice, I told her.

She was full of regrets about what could have been.

The day I caught them, he just smiled.

She looked away.

How to punish them?

He for stealing my property.

Her for betrayal.

I own a gun.

But shooting them is easy.

I need them to suffer.

Feel my pain.

Hanging myself is lingering justice.

I’ll suffer momentarily.

They’ll suffer forever.

Guilt.

Kicking the stool away makes it final.

They must watch it happen.

Door opens, and our gaze locks.

They stand waiting.

My friend rushes over.

To remove the noose, or so I thought.

But he kicked the stool away instead.

Short Story
Short Form
Flash Fiction
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