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Summary

A woman takes revenge on her unfaithful spouse by cooking and consuming the heart of her lover, in a tale that blends horror with a culinary recipe.

Abstract

"Hard Soup" is a dark narrative by Ginger Bangs that revolves around a woman's chilling act of revenge against her adulterous partner. The protagonist meticulously prepares a deer heart with a blend of traditional ingredients and a disturbing addition of insecticide, symbolizing the poisoned relationship. The tale unfolds as she cooks the heart, reminiscent of her emotional turmoil, and serves it in a morbid setting with her deceased rival's body. The story culminates with her consuming the heart, a metaphor for internalizing her pain and anger, as she awaits the discovery of the gruesome scene, reflecting a desire for a posthumous revelation of the betrayal she suffered.

Opinions

  • The author presents the act of cooking as a ritualistic process, imbued with emotional significance and a means of processing grief and anger.
  • The inclusion of insecticide in the recipe is a powerful symbol of the toxic nature of the protagonist's relationship and her desire to purge the betrayal.
  • The story challenges the reader to confront the darker aspects of human emotion, particularly the depths of despair and the lengths one might go to for revenge.
  • The protagonist's actions suggest a sense of finality and closure, as she seeks to end her suffering by consuming the literal heart of her pain.
  • The narrative style blurs the lines between a culinary experience and a tale of horror, creating a unique and unsettling atmosphere.
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Hard Soup

She had a smile on her face.

Let’s see just what this fellow is cooking up, shall we? A chilling tale of revenge and (possibly) regret. Mind you, except for the “added” ingredients this is an excellent recipe for deer heart — so if any of you are game, and have got the necessary game, give this a try, would you? 💯 Story Challenge (Story #6)

I’ve marinated the meat in the best red wine I could afford, five days now, with garlic onion and bay leaf and a little stick of cinnamon, lots of cracked black pepper, and lots of aching tears.

On the fifth day I rubbed it with olive oil and browned it well in a hot pan. I kissed it for luck. Crane was right, it tasted bitter.

I carried the meat ceremoniously to a black metal roasting pan that I’d beaten with a hammer into the rough shape of a coffin. I browned a sliced onion in the pan, added more tears, and a little butter for flavor.

Then I deglazed the fry pan with a bit of the marinade, stirring and scraping the caked-on bits from the pan, swilling it into the juice for more flavor.

I poured the contents into the coffin-roaster, covering the meat just a little over half way. I stuck the coffin-roaster into a slow oven, set to three hundred degrees. Nice and slow, everything took time, let the hurting leak on out.

I added the insecticide last.

I served the meal in a valentine shaped bowl, bought especially for the occasion. I set her body in her chair across the table from me. The freezer kept her when I could not. Her chest hung open like a secret treasure box. She had a smile on her face. I’d placed it there, a finishing touch before placing her in the freezer.

Finishing nails.

Then I spooned it up. Bitter, it tasted bitter, but no worse than finding your wife in bed with your best friend.

Heart meat is hard, unless you cook it properly.

I ate it up, every last drop.

I bit my lip until the gag reflex stopped working, and waited to die.

If I’d timed it right, they’d find us together before she thawed. A frozen tableau, two hearts, one broken in my chest and one well braised in my belly.

Well done.

Well done.

Ginger Bangs is a complicated lady. She is as changeable as a prairie fire. She writes erotica, horror, recipes, slice-of-life, and EVEN poetry! Please follow her today. Believe me, once you’ve read one of her stories you will DEFINITELY want to stay on her tale!

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