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Summary

This content is a sonnet titled "Fragmented View" that poetically captures the moment a dragonfly preys on a mosquito, while the mosquito is unaware of the imminent danger as it focuses on feeding from a boy's artery, who himself is preoccupied with choosing ice cream, oblivious to the natural drama unfolding around him.

Abstract

"Fragmented View" is a poem that reflects on the selective perspectives inherent in life. It begins with a dragonfly spotting a mosquito in its field of vision, signaling the start of a predator-prey interaction. The mosquito, driven by the need to nourish her offspring, pays no attention to the approaching threat. Meanwhile, the boy, whose arm is the feeding ground for the mosquito, is lost in thought about the flavor of ice cream he desires, oblivious to both insects. The poem suggests that life presents us with a fragmented view, where no creature is aware of the full picture. It is a meditation on the limitations of perception, suggesting that while we may not see everything, acknowledging our partial understanding is preferable to ignorance. The poem was written in response to a prompt for The National Poetry Month 2021 by Shabd Aaweg Review.

Opinions

  • The poem implies that every creature is focused on its immediate concerns, which limits its awareness of other events occurring in its vicinity.
  • There is a sense of the inevitability of nature's cycle, as the dragonfly preys on the mosquito without any interference from the human subject.
  • The poem may be commenting on the human tendency to become absorbed in mundane decisions, such as choosing an ice cream flavor, while being disconnected from the broader ecosystem.
  • The author seems to appreciate the complexity and interconnectedness of life, even in seemingly insignificant events.
  • The mention of the National Poetry Month Event and the prompt by Literary Impulse suggests the poem is part of a larger community of poets engaging with similar themes and prompts.

Day 1 Prompt

Fragmented View

A sonnet

photo by William J Spirdione

The dragonfly saw movement in lens four, Thirteen up from the bottom of left eye. Mosquito’s not drawing blood any more, A couple of flaps, she’s food in the sky.

She did not see the risk, didn’t pay heed, Mosquito saw warmth of boys artery. She flew closer to arm, wanted to feed, Developing young left a quandary.

The ice cream shop door, was in the boy’s eye, His only thought was what flavor to eat. Mosquito did not see the dragonfly, The dragonfly did not see the birds feet.

Our fragmented view is all life gives one, No one sees all, but it’s better than none.

Written in response to prompt by Literary Impulse

Poetry
Sonnet
Literary Impulse
Napowrimoshabdaaweg
Fragmented
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