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Summary

"Agitated Bliss" is a metaphorical poem that explores the tumultuous and serene aspects of the human psyche through the imagery of the sea.

Abstract

The poem "Agitated Bliss" by Natalie Frank (Taye Carrol) uses the sea as a metaphor for the mind's complexities. It describes the fluidity of thought, akin to the sea's currents, and the speaker's surrender to the natural flow of ideas. The poem touches on the dangers of trying to control one's thoughts, likening it to drowning, and the tranquility found in acceptance. It captures the ebb and flow of emotions, from the calm of low tide to the intensity of a storm. The imagery evokes the sensory experiences of the sea, including the sound of rain, the texture of shells, and the chill of the water, to convey the depth of human feeling. The poem concludes with a return to the self, as the sea's true course finds its way back to shore, suggesting a restoration of balance and truth.

Opinions

  • The speaker views the act of trying to control thoughts as futile and potentially harmful, leading to mental exhaustion and loss of self.
  • Emotions are depicted as tidal, with periods of calm interspersed with moments of overwhelming intensity.
  • The poem suggests that there is beauty and purity in embracing the natural rhythms of the mind and emotions, akin to the comforting sounds of summer and the gentle chiming of rain.
  • The sea's impact on the senses is used to illustrate the profound effect that emotions and memories can have on an individual, leaving a lasting impression.
  • The author implies that the cyclical nature of the sea, and by extension the human experience, inevitably returns to a state of equilibrium, despite the tumult along the way.

Agitated Bliss

A Metaphor

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She thinks like the sea, all fluidity The current pulls at her thoughts Until they’re no longer Recognizably hers Flowing past her triggered gaze

She lets them go where er they will Knowing better than to direct She’ll only tire, falter, drown And like Ophelia off she’ll float In onslaught of a dissonance

Her moods remain at low tide ebb Broken rare by cyclone’s roar A function of the red bloom’s boast Blown straight in off the water’s depths To make the others cower, seize

And when the wind truly kicks up The sound of rain on bone is heard The gentled chiming softly pure Of summer comforts warmly felt It floats by on a memory

It speaks of cabled moonstone white The pieces seeking to collide Like tumbled shells on seabed floor Which rub exposed skin red rash raw Of youthful bathers buoyant form

From waves true course return to shore Refusing through lips tinged with blue From frigid mother’s waters kiss Until repeated can be heard The call which comes upon the wind Seeks to restore a balanced truth

Natalie Frank (Taye Carrol) has had work featured in Haunted Waters Press, Weirdbook Magazine, Siren’s Call Publications, Lycan Valley Press and Zero Fiction among others. Her poetry has been featured in several anthologies. She is Editor for 1-One-Infinity, The Partnered Pen and One Table, One World and is Editor in Chief for Promposity and Mental Gecko. She is also the Managing Editor for Novellas and Serials at LVP Publications.

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