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Summary

A stranger humorously quizzes the narrator on the collective noun for ducks while they watch the birds eat lettuce.

Abstract

In the short story "A Murder of Ducks" by Gustave Deresse, a brief encounter on a park bench leads to a playful exchange about the collective nouns for ducks. The narrator is surprised by a stranger's whisper about offering whole leaf lettuce to the ducks, which prompts the question, "Is it a ‘murder’ of ducks?" The narrator confidently corrects the stranger, stating that the correct term is a "paddling" of ducks, and they share a moment of camaraderie as they observe the ducks enjoying their meal. The story is a light-hearted exploration of language and shared knowledge, set against the peaceful backdrop of nature.

Opinions

  • The author seems to appreciate the quirky nature of collective nouns and the joy of sharing obscure knowledge.
  • The stranger's amusement at the narrator's reaction suggests a playful attitude towards language and its usage.
  • The narrator's confidence in their knowledge indicates a sense of pride and enjoyment in the peculiarities of the English language.
  • The shared nod between the narrator and the stranger implies a mutual respect and connection formed through this trivial pursuit.

Short Fiction | 50 Word Story | Vocabulary

A Murder of Ducks

by Gustave Deresse

Ducks at Dusk — Image Produced by Author Using Canva Pro

“Tonight,” the voice whispers, “you get whole leaf.” Amused by my jolt, the stranger smirks, faces me on the bench, and asks lightly, “Is it a ‘murder’ of ducks?”

I know this! “Nah,” I say, “it’s a ‘paddling’.” I grin; we nod at one another. The ducks devour the lettuce.

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