avatarMariana Busarova

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The web content presents a reflective poem titled "A Misled Reality" that delves into themes of existential despair and inner turmoil, structured as a Shakespearean sonnet.

Abstract

"A Misled Reality" is a poem that captures the essence of a melancholic journey through life, where individuals are weighed down by their own choices and the burdens of existence. It is crafted in the form of a Shakespearean sonnet, consisting of 14 lines divided into three quatrains and a final couplet, following an ABAB CDCD EFEF GG rhyme scheme. The poem reflects on the pain of sowing discord in the world and the struggle to maintain harmony within oneself. It acknowledges the difficulty of overcoming inner demons, particularly when misled by loneliness and venom. The poem's inspiration is drawn from the Themed Poetry Challenge, emphasizing the earthly aspects of poetry.

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  • The author conveys a sense of despair and aimlessness in life's journey, suggesting a profound disconnection from a more fulfilling existence.
  • There is a palpable regret over the discordant seeds being sown in the world, implying a yearning for a more harmonious state of being.
  • The poem suggests that the inner demons, fueled by loneliness and negativity, are difficult to conquer, reflecting a struggle within the human psyche.
  • The reference to the Shakespearean sonnet form indicates a deliberate choice to use a classic structure to explore modern themes, perhaps to draw a parallel between past and present human conditions.
  • The mention of the poem being inspired by a themed poetry challenge hints at a broader context of creative engagement with contemporary issues.

A Misled Reality

And inner demons

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Our days are going so wretched and low And we’re singing our lethargic song. We do not look at the eternal glow Under the burden of the road, too long.

We stumble alone. Choices are so tough — No home, into an aimless existence The soul is torn, divided into halves. To an abyss, we go, with persistence.

We sow the new seeds of the world’s discord All that’s done has a bitter, painful price. We forget how to touch the right soul’s chord Harmony escapes away from us.

Whether misled by loneliness and venom We cannot hold our ill inner demons?

This poem is written in the form of a sonnet. A sonnet is a poem that has 14 lines. Each line has the same number of syllables, and the poem has a fixed pattern of rhymes. My sonnet is structured like the Shakespearean sonnets.

The sonnets are almost all constructed of three quatrains (four-line stanzas) followed by a final couplet. The sonnets are composed in iambic pentameter, the metric poetic step used in Shakespeare’s plays.

The rhyme scheme is ABAB CDCD EFEF GG. Sonnets using this scheme are known as Shakespearean sonnets, English sonnets, or Elizabethan sonnets. Often, at the end of the third quatrain occurs the volta (“turn”), where the mood of the poem shifts, and the poet expresses a turn of thought.

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