avatarJade Willow

Summary

The poem "You’ve Chosen The Dark Side" by Jade Willow reflects on the transformation and descent into darkness of someone who has embraced evil, as observed by the speaker who mourns the loss of the person they once knew.

Abstract

Jade Willow's poem "You’ve Chosen The Dark Side" is a poignant piece that delves into the emotional turmoil of witnessing someone's moral decline. The poem begins with a vivid description of the corruption taking hold, painting a picture of darkness and wickedness that consumes the individual. The imagery of poison, plagued eyes, and a one-way journey into a demonic fire illustrates the irreversible nature of the person's choice. The speaker reveals a personal connection to the subject, expressing shock and sorrow at the transformation. The once familiar eyes now appear black, symbolizing the loss of the person they once knew. The poem concludes with a byline, crediting Jade Willow as the author and hinting at a larger body of work to explore.

Opinions

  • The speaker conveys a deep sense of loss and betrayal as they witness the transformation of someone they cared for into a being of darkness.
  • The use of dark and foreboding imagery suggests the speaker's belief in the irreversible and destructive nature of the subject's choice.
  • The poem reflects a judgmental view of the subject's moral descent, referring to their actions as "wickedness" and implying a finality to their decision.
  • There is a sense of helplessness in the speaker's tone, indicating an inability to prevent the subject's fall into darkness.
  • The reference to demons and fire evokes a supernatural or metaphysical perspective on the consequences of choosing evil.
  • The speaker's emotional response to the subject's transformation is captured in the vivid description of their reaction, highlighting the personal impact of the subject's choices.

You’ve Chosen The Dark Side

Letting the poison in

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Poison fills your veins Your eyes have become plagued It’s taken you; the black Bleeding darkness The clouds turn grey It unveils itself The wickedness of your ways There’s no point of return You’ve entered the fire The demons watch you walk across as they play the lyre

You turn to look at me and smile Eyes black My soul shrieks I’ve lost you thrice But this, I never expected to see

Jade Willow

Poetry
Love
Mental Health
Relationships
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