You Need A Killer Title, Not A Title Killer
Tips to turn your title into a hook
I’m writing a book about self-publishing on Amazon, and every week, I’m releasing a chapter here so that my Medium buddies can read it…for free!
If you missed the first article, you can find it here. Today, it’s all about titles.
A bad title will kill your book
The difference between a good title and a bad title can be a lost sale. Humans are visual creatures, and they will judge a book by its cover: the first thing they will see is the book and the title, so you must get this right.
You probably started your book with a title in mind. It was probably the first thing you decided about your book, like naming your baby before they were born.
I challenge you to press pause and reassess your title. Because you are biased about your book, you will seek validation to make your ego feel good about your title choice.
Leave your ego aside and try to seek honest feedback from neutral readers who don’t know anything about the story.
Use the following guiding questions:
- Is it clear?
- Is it appealing?
- Is it memorable?
Although I’m not a fan of the famous ‘clear, not clever’ (I prefer clear and clever), clarity rules when it comes to titles: don’t try to go fancy and intriguing.
Think of a menu in a restaurant: the items must be clear enough so that you know what you are eating. If it’s chicken, call it chicken.
Meanwhile, you also want a title that is appealing and memorable so that it stands out from the other books on the same digital shelf. That’s where your subtitle has an opportunity to shine and bring it home for the readers.
Although the subtitle is optional on Amazon, most authors use it as a double-click to give a glimpse into the story and bring an extra layer of clarity. The combination of title plus subtitle is the hook that should lead readers into the book summary.
When I started working on my latest book with my writing mentor, Australian best-seller Vicki Bennet, she gave me honest and constructive feedback about my initial title and said,
‘It doesn’t land well; as a reader, I don’t know what to expect.’
She didn’t like my baby’s name!
She also gave me an excellent piece of advice,
‘Don’t worry about the title now. It’s hidden in the book. You have to give it time to flourish and come out.’
I had no idea what she was talking about, and for weeks, nothing happened. Then, one day, I woke up and knew it. ‘The Flight Home’ was the perfect title for my book. It was always hidden between the lines…
Your title is hidden between the lines.
Assignment
Review your title and your subtitle. Go back to the drawing board and list topics, keywords, and terms related to your book.
Ask a third party who knows nothing about your book for feedback.
Is it clear?
Is it appealing?
Is it memorable?
Do a Google search for books with a similar title to ensure your title is unique. You don’t want to be plain chicken.
Last, let the book speak to you. Your title is hidden there. You have no clue what I’m talking about, but once you know, you know!
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