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Summary

The web content is a personal narrative about longing for connection and the hesitation in reaching out, framed around the experience of checking for a message from a significant woman and contemplating sending an email.

Abstract

The text "You Give Me" from "The Other, #96" captures the emotional state of a person yearning for acknowledgment from a woman he cares about. It begins with the protagonist's inner turmoil as he waits for a message from her, reflecting his desire for validation and to feel alive. The narrative progresses through his actions—checking emails, contemplating writing, and eventually drafting a message—all while considering her life and responsibilities. He seeks the right words to express his feelings, hoping to convey a unique connection. The piece concludes with an invitation to readers to engage with more of the author's work and a brief background on "The Other," revealing its origins as a Tumblr blog, a Facebook group series, and a printed book before being translated and published on Medium.

Opinions

  • The protagonist values the unique connection he shares with the woman, emphasizing that she gives him something no one else does.
  • There is a sense of vulnerability and hesitation in initiating contact, indicative of the fear of rejection or concern for the other person's time and commitments.
  • The author extends a personal invitation to readers, suggesting a desire for community and engagement with his audience.
  • The background provided on "The Other" suggests a pride in the story's evolution from a personal blog to various published formats, including a printed book and online publication.
  • The use of images and the structure of the content imply a thoughtful curation of the narrative and its presentation to the reader, highlighting the importance of visual elements in storytelling.

You Give Me

The Other, #96

Photo: Øivind H. Solheim

I feel an inner turmoil Waiting for a word from her need to know that she wants me want to know that I am alive Concerned, I grab the phone log on to the email open the inbox see no new message

I want to get in touch Write some words hoping to get an answer I hesitate before I hit ‘send’ I think she sure has a lot to do children, house and home and all that

I’m searching for some words in the end a few words that can reach her You give me what no other gives me I will give you what no one else gives you

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The Other (DEN ANDRE) is an experimental story originally published in Norwegian language as a Tumblr blog and a series in a closed Facebook group 2015/2016. The story was also published as a printed book in 2016. Stories from the book are in 2018 and 2019 translated and published on medium.com . Contact: [email protected]

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