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Summary

This web page provides writing tips and alternatives to starting sentences with "and" or "but," while also sharing nostalgic educational songs from ABC's Schoolhouse Rock.

Abstract

The web page titled "Writers, please don’t catch conjunctivitis and spread “pink-eye” to your readers" offers advice to writers to avoid starting sentences with conjunctions such as "and" or "but." Instead, the article suggests combining sentences into complex sentences or using alternatives such as "however," "yet," "nevertheless," "notwithstanding," "also," and "moreover." The article also includes a reference to the educational songs from ABC's Schoolhouse Rock, with embedded YouTube videos of two songs: "Conjunction Junction" and "Interjections." Lastly, the page shares additional writing tips and resources, including the benefits of using first-person narrative and understanding Medium's SEO description setting.

Bullet points

  • Avoid starting sentences with "and" or "but."
  • Combine sentences into complex sentences or use alternatives such as "however," "yet," "nevertheless," "notwithstanding," "also," and "moreover."
  • Reference to educational songs from ABC's Schoolhouse Rock.
  • Embedded YouTube videos of "Conjunction Junction" and "Interjections."
  • Additional writing tips and resources:
    • Using first-person narrative.
    • Understanding Medium's SEO description setting.
  • Promotion of an AI service, ZAI.chat, as a cost-effective alternative to ChatGPT Plus.

Writers, please don’t catch conjunctivitis and spread “pink-eye” to your readers — refrain from starting sentences with “and” or “but.”

Royalty-free stock photo ID: 1048226590 By Sergey Granev

Either, combine your sentences into complex sentences, or 1) replace “but” with “however” or another appropriate word such as e.g., “yet,” “nevertheless” or “notwithstanding” or 2) replace “and” with “also,” “moreover,” “furthermore” or another appropriate word or phrase, such as “in addition.”

Does anyone else still remember much of this song from ABC’s Schoolhouse Rock educational pieces during commercial breaks of Saturday morning cartoons?

Here’s another favorite of mine:

Here are some less stringent tips from me:

Try telling your story in the first-person-narrative; lead by example, not by instructing

What is Medium’s SEO Description Setting

“Out of Context” — three words a writer should never have to hear nor utter

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