Write Twice, Publish Once
Building a good article is like any other carpentry project

“Measure twice, cut once.” That’s the sage advice given to every new student of carpentry. If you cut a board in the wrong place, you haven’t just wasted your time. You’ve ruined the board.
If you didn’t catch your mistake, you’ve also caused a huge problem in your project. Who knows how far the project has gone before the mistake is discovered? Future boards that have been attached need to be pulled apart, and the assembly work redone.
I recently discovered that the same is true of writing a good article.
I was researching the best ways to increase self-confidence. I had compiled ten tips, each with an example story. It was great information!
It was also a 20-minute read.
The editor of Curious who read it had very kind things to say about the content. She also laid out a few facts about the reality of reader attention spans.
What readers want
Pop culture readers want quick sound bites. They are the people Medium’s new “short format” was designed for.
Traditional readers want longer, in depth explorations of topics. Longer, but not “long”.
The sweet spot for reader engagement varies depending on the publication. It is likely to fall somewhere in the 5–9 minute range. Marketing gurus recommend longer articles than that. The theory is, if a reader makes it all the way to the end, they’re yours. But that doesn’t matter if you’re not trying to sell something.
The length of the sweet spot also varies based on the type of material you’re covering.
I write mostly in self improvement and productivity. It’s no surprise that the productivity articles that do best are the shorter ones. Meanwhile, the self improvement articles that do best are in depth. One point explored deeply works better (at least in my experience) than ten at a high level.
Reader engagement also falls off for second or third articles in a series. It’s natural, when you think about it. Would you want to go to see a movie called Box Office Smash, Part 2 if you hadn’t seen Part 1? Of course not!
So the potential readership of part 2 of a series is not your entire potential readership. It’s the people who read part 1. Given that only a fraction of those probably see the new article, it’s no wonder the numbers plummet.
Pick your favorites
The editor had an excellent suggestion for me. She suggested that I take my 20-minute article containing 10 tips, and choose my favorite 5. That would cut the article into the range where it was likely to get reader engagement.
What it would also do is to weed out the weakest tips.
There were tips that, while helpful, were things that people had already heard a million times. There were excellent tips with stories that were probably familiar to the audience.
So the 5 favorites I was left with combined the best tips with the strongest, most personal stories. They were the ones most likely to have an impact upon the reader.
The revised article was not only accepted, it was featured on the front page of Curious.
What this means for you
As Sara Barnes said in her article, what you choose not to say makes what you do say more valuable. So “write twice, publish once” to make your writing as valuable as you can.
In a list article
When you’re writing a list article, write twice as many items as you think you’ll need. For a top 3 article, write 6. For a top 5 article, write 10.
Write them all to the best standard that you can. Then let them sit a day or so. Read them over again.
Which are your favorites? Which provide the best, most actionable information? Which have the most compelling stories associated with them? Which will have the most impact on the reader?
Keep those, and cut the rest.
In an essay or opinion piece
Structure your essay or opinion piece the way you usually do. Create your main point and your supporting points. Add your illustrations for your supporting points.
Write them all to the best standard that you can. Then let them sit a day or so. Read them over again.
Are there any points that can be combined? Any illustrations that can be trimmed down to avoid irrelevant details? Any supporting points that, frankly, don’t provide much support?
Trim away everything that weighs the piece down.
Conclusion
Readers have short attention spans. Don’t include all your research or illustrative stories in a single article.
Don’t spread your research or article material out over parts, either. The readership for parts 2 and onward drop off dramatically.
Instead, cut your article so that you keep only the best bits. Make it a highlights reel of the original article.
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