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Summary

The text is a passionate expression of longing and desire from one lover to another who is away, filled with vivid sensory imagery and intimate questions that convey deep yearning and affection.

Abstract

The author, Jupiter Grant, pens a heartfelt and evocative piece titled "While You’re Away," which captures the intense emotional and physical longing of a lover separated by distance. Through a series of poignant questions, the writer imagines their presence affecting their partner across the Atlantic, evoking the warmth of their touch, the sound of their name whispered, and the taste of their kisses. The narrative is rich with erotic imagery, painting a picture of the author's desire to be close to their beloved, to be held and to share an intimate moment that transcends time and space. The piece concludes with a plea for acknowledgment that the feelings are mutual, and the author has not been forgotten by their partner. Jupiter Grant, a self-published author, blogger, and audiobook producer, invites readers to engage with their work and offers a glimpse into their other writings, including "A Whispered “I Love You”, "The Ceremony", and "Good Things Come in Threes ;)".

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  • The author expresses a deep sense of missing their partner, emphasizing the physical and emotional void left by their absence.
  • There is a strong desire for intimacy and connection, as the author vividly describes sensual experiences they

While You’re Away

Say you haven’t forgotten me…

Photo by René Porter on Unsplash

Do you feel my fevered imagination reaching out to you, hot tendrils stretching sinuously across the Atlantic?

Do you feel my hungry kisses on your chest, on your neck, on your mouth?

Can you hear me whispering your name, with furtive fingers stuffed under my waistband, a second-rate approximation of your sublime touch?

Have you pictured my lipstick-smudged lips enclosing hot and wet around your head, sinking down slow, drawing you deep? Have you imagined the sensation of my tongue against the thick, veiny shaft, my hand cupping your balls?

Does the warm, damp scent of my arousal rise in your nostrils when you climb into bed each night, and does the ghost of my musky fragrance spur your hand on harder, faster whenever you palm your angry, red tumescence?

Through all this time we’ve been apart, have you ever imagined me lying naked beside you, nestled in the crook of your arm, fantasised about the smell of my hair, or the soft touch of my breast against your palm?

Have you ever lain awake at night missing me, wishing we could stop the clocks, put real life on hold, leap across the ocean, and just have one moment in which we could just be?

Are you still thinking about me while you’re away, and when are you coming home?

I haven’t forgotten you.

Say you haven’t forgotten me.

Jupiter Grant is a self-published author, blogger, narrator and audiobook producer.

Enquiries and comments are always welcome. You can also find me on Twitter @GrantJupiter

Also by Jupiter:

Erotica
Love
Loneliness
Separation
Freeform
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