Summary

The text is a poetic and intimate reflection on the experience of watching a loved one sleep, filled with tender affection and yearning.

Abstract

"While You Sleep" is a poignant piece that captures the intimate and tender moments of observing a partner in slumber. The author, Jupiter Grant, paints a vivid picture of the sleeping subject's serene features—from the gentle parting of their lips to the subtle twitching of their eyelids. The narrator expresses a deep longing to connect, describing the warmth of their partner's skin and the desire to awaken them with a kiss. Despite the urge to rouse their Sleeping Beauty, the narrator chooses to quietly watch over them, cherishing the love shared in these silent, peaceful moments. The piece concludes with a brief author bio and a list of other works by Jupiter Grant, inviting readers to explore more of their writings on love and intimacy.

Opinions

The author conveys a profound sense of love and adoration for the person they are watching sleep.
There is a palpable sense of respect and restraint as the narrator chooses not to disturb their partner's rest, despite their own desires.
The text suggests that the act of simply being present and observing can be a powerful expression of love and connection.
The author seems to find beauty in the minutiae of the partner's sleeping behavior, highlighting the depth of their emotional investment in the relationship.
Through the mention of other works, the author appears to be an advocate for open discussions about love and intimacy, as seen in titles like "A Whispered “I Love You”" and "The Finer Things."

While You Sleep

Do you feel my eyes upon you?

I watch you while you sleep,

Do you feel my eyes upon you?

Your lips slightly parted as you breathe softly, gently.

Your lashes resting against your skin,

while your eyelids twitch-

what is it you see in your dream landscape?

I kiss your naked shoulder while you sleep.

Do you feel my lips upon you?

Your skin is warm, and still damp with sweat.

Smooth and supple beneath my restless fingers.

I want to wake you with a kiss,

You, my Sleeping Beauty while I play Handsome Prince.

I miss you while you sleep.

Think of shaking you back to life, to touch, to talk, to taste again.

And again.

And again, for as long as the hourglass will allow.

But instead I watch you rest, and am consumed with love.

Jupiter Grant is a self-published author, blogger, narrator and audiobook producer.

Enquiries and comments are always welcome. You can also find me on Twitter @GrantJupiter

While You Sleep

Do you feel my eyes upon you?

A Whispered “I Love You”

Oh, how I’ve dreamed of a love like this…

Did We Have Sex This Morning…?

A poem about an early morning fumble. Or was it?

The Finer Things

Nothing in this world is finer, than having you in my vagina…