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my shoulders.</p><p id="dc4a">The Psych officer handed me a cup of coffee and gave me a thumbs up.</p><p id="da00">I managed a weak smile.</p><p id="bca0">“So what happened?” said the Detective’s lips.</p><p id="9245">“I smelt the smoke.”</p><p id="2546">“Ah huh.”</p><p id="8881">“I was heading this way, but I couldn’t see nothing.”</p><p id="d051">He nodded, his trilby bobbing up and down.</p><p id="c46e">“Then a smell like burned plastic and… ”</p><p id="df52">I trailed off as the knife of memory twisted in my stomach.</p><p id="7120">“What?” he looked up.</p><p id="f41a">“It smelled like a barbecue.”</p><p id="2c5f">He didn’t write that down.</p><p id="2264"><i>

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A story in response to our weekly prompt: <a href="https://readmedium.com/writing-prompt-follow-your-nose-cdcf1e51201c"></a></i><a href="https://readmedium.com/writing-prompt-follow-your-nose-cdcf1e51201c">Follow Your Nose</a></p><p id="c8de"><i>It’s part of a longer story, a Mini Novella in Flash. Each week I’ll add another piece until the final story reveals what has happened when the end is in sight.</i></p><p id="e406"><a href="https://readmedium.com/there-was-only-blood-621c373c99df">Part 1<b></b></a><b> </b>| <a href="https://readmedium.com/when-the-music-comes-8a5bd8fd29bc">Part 2<b></b></a><b> </b>| <b>Part 3</b> | ▶️ Part 4 Coming Soon</p></article></body>

Where There’s Smoke

A deaf woman retells her partial witness

Photo by Cole Keister from Pexels

I fidgeted with my soot-stained jersey, rustling the silver space blanket on my shoulders.

The Psych officer handed me a cup of coffee and gave me a thumbs up.

I managed a weak smile.

“So what happened?” said the Detective’s lips.

“I smelt the smoke.”

“Ah huh.”

“I was heading this way, but I couldn’t see nothing.”

He nodded, his trilby bobbing up and down.

“Then a smell like burned plastic and… ”

I trailed off as the knife of memory twisted in my stomach.

“What?” he looked up.

“It smelled like a barbecue.”

He didn’t write that down.

A story in response to our weekly prompt: Follow Your Nose

It’s part of a longer story, a Mini Novella in Flash. Each week I’ll add another piece until the final story reveals what has happened when the end is in sight.

Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | ▶️ Part 4 Coming Soon

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