avatarMichael Ritoch

Summary

An elderly couple reflects on their enduring love and the passage of time, finding joy and contentment in each other's presence despite the physical ailments of aging.

Abstract

The passage captures a tender moment between two elderly individuals who have grown old together. Despite the physical signs of aging—grey hair, weight gain, and health issues—their affection for each other remains unchanged. They acknowledge the departure of their children and the absence of daily struggles, yet they find themselves at a loss for what to do next. In this moment of uncertainty, the woman offers her partner freedom and reassurance, telling him he can do anything he wants, to which he responds with the desire for intimacy, suggesting a deeper connection that transcends their physical state and rejuvenates their spirits.

Opinions

  • The couple shares a deep, unwavering love that has withstood the test of time.
  • Aging is portrayed with its challenges, including physical decline and the empty nest syndrome.
  • The woman's response to her partner's sense of aimlessness is one of empowerment and support, emphasizing the importance of companionship and mutual respect in a relationship.
  • The final lines imply that intimacy and emotional closeness can make one feel young and alive, regardless of physical age.

When I’m Older…

Photo by John Moeses Bauan on Unsplash

She drank her coffee I smiled Same love, Same face, Some additions, grey tangles, Heavier, more to hold Lines stolen from crows

But who am I Back hurts, Knees squeak Eyes blur Hands stiff

But…

I love you pretty girl

Love you too

The kids left us long ago

Smile at her

I’m done babe Nothing to fight Or work for What do I do

Anything you want, she says

All I want is you

Then do me

And I’m young again

Poem
Old Age
Love
Poetry
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