We’re in an ‘e-state’ Frame of Mind
Turned inward
We’re living in an “e*-state” frame of mind Multinationals’ momentum drive us and our kind Even when out with others in a lovely field To our phones and tech we yield Selfies our form of photography “Why?” remains a mystery Throw off the yoke of inward-facing hell Try again living in I. R. L.
*e — electronic
What was ostensibly a tool, a servant, has become our master.
Couples wander the street faces downcast, staring at screens. Entire families, out for dinner, barely acknowledge one another’s presence at the table, preferring instead to tweet or text or otherwise disengage from real life, seduced by the power of a 5 by 3 inch modern-day version of the idiot box.
Hikers on magnificent trails and city dwellers strolling in beautiful parks shatter the silence or obscure the subtle sounds of nature with blaring music from always-present portable “entertainment” systems housed in the pockets of their jeans.
What’s wrong with us?
Phones and their attendant apps have a place in our world, but they shouldn’t rule it.
Take a tech break. Look up and look out into the world. Be present in the moment. Save the screen time for later.
I would never have thought to draft a story of this type without Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她)’s excellent prompt and her thoughtful tag.
I’m tagging you because I want to see your thoughts and emotions in print. Please favor us with a rhyming poem using the six words in bold above. Thanks friends. (“e-state” is my creation, “estate” was the original word). Everyone who sees this can participate as well.
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