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Summary

The article reflects on society's overdependence on technology, particularly smartphones, and encourages a return to real-life interactions and experiences.

Abstract

The piece, titled "We’re in an ‘e-state’ Frame of Mind," critiques the modern obsession with digital devices, noting how even in beautiful natural settings or during social outings, people are increasingly absorbed by their screens. It describes a world where personal interactions are neglected in favor of digital communication and entertainment. The author, inspired by a prompt from Lucy Dan 蛋小姐, suggests that while technology has its place, it should not dominate our lives. The article calls for a "tech break," urging readers to be present in the moment and to prioritize real-world experiences over screen time. It also invites readers to participate in a creative exercise by writing a poem using six bolded words from the text.

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  • The author believes that our relationship with technology has shifted from tool to master, with devices dictating our behavior and attention.
  • There is a concern that the constant use of phones and apps is leading to a disconnection from reality and meaningful human interactions.
  • The article suggests that the overuse of technology is causing us to miss out on the subtleties and beauty of the natural world.
  • It emphasizes the importance of being present and engaged with our immediate surroundings and the people in them.
  • The author values the role of poetry and creativity in expressing and processing our thoughts and emotions about technology.
  • By tagging specific individuals and inviting broader participation, the author expresses a desire for a

We’re in an ‘e-state’ Frame of Mind

Turned inward

Be with the people you’re with, not with your phone. * * * Photo by ROBIN WORRALL on Unsplash

We’re living in an “e*-state” frame of mind Multinationals’ momentum drive us and our kind Even when out with others in a lovely field To our phones and tech we yield Selfies our form of photography “Why?” remains a mystery Throw off the yoke of inward-facing hell Try again living in I. R. L.

*e — electronic

What was ostensibly a tool, a servant, has become our master.

Couples wander the street faces downcast, staring at screens. Entire families, out for dinner, barely acknowledge one another’s presence at the table, preferring instead to tweet or text or otherwise disengage from real life, seduced by the power of a 5 by 3 inch modern-day version of the idiot box.

Hikers on magnificent trails and city dwellers strolling in beautiful parks shatter the silence or obscure the subtle sounds of nature with blaring music from always-present portable “entertainment” systems housed in the pockets of their jeans.

What’s wrong with us?

Phones and their attendant apps have a place in our world, but they shouldn’t rule it.

Take a tech break. Look up and look out into the world. Be present in the moment. Save the screen time for later.

I would never have thought to draft a story of this type without Lucy Dan 蛋小姐 (she/her/她)’s excellent prompt and her thoughtful tag.

I’m tagging you because I want to see your thoughts and emotions in print. Please favor us with a rhyming poem using the six words in bold above. Thanks friends. (“e-state” is my creation, “estate” was the original word). Everyone who sees this can participate as well.

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