We Fell
A poem about love and endings
There are not tears enough for love that breaks. With every breath remembering why we fell, I look above: these are not my tears. Enough for love to end in pain, but I cannot cry again of shame, for you, won’t weep at love’s death. There are not tears enough for love that breaks with every breath.
I run a poetry group on Zoom that meets once a month, and every month I put up a prompt for the poets to try. It’s completely optional “homework” for everyone, but I always find it’s a fun exercise to try — it gets me out of my comfort zone, which tends to be free verse. And I’ve had poets (including myself!) who have found a style that suits our writing really well.
This poem is a triolet, which is defined by the Academy of American Poets as this:
The requirements of this fixed form are straightforward: the first line is repeated in the fourth and seventh lines; the second line is repeated in the final line; and only the first two end-words are used to complete the tight rhyme scheme. Thus, the poet writes only five original lines, giving the triolet a deceptively simple appearance: ABaAabAB, where capital letters indicate repeated lines.
It’s a short form, but it’s hard to find lines that repeat well and rhyme well. I found it a good challenge, and I’d try it again. If you’ve never written this poetic form, I’d definitely encourage you to give it a try! If you do, please feel free to tag me in your poem — I’d love to read yours. :)
If you enjoyed this poem, there’s more where that came from:
