100 WORDS
Under the Influence
Thrifty Words 100 Challenge #20: Trance
The theatre.
Burlesque.
A mentalist.
The pocket watch swings before me.
Counts down
100,
99
98
Blackness.
Quiet blackness.
Emptiness.
Solitude.
Like floating, but not.
Nothingness.
Whispers in the darkness.
Glimpses of light.
Sounds, muted, far away.
Glorious nothingness.
Time stands still.
Time whizzes past me.
I am one with the universe.
Looking out.
I am outside of the universe.
Looking in.
I hear a snap.
A distinct snap.
Like fingers.
Light.
Sounds.
Dizziness.
Nausea.
I look around.
There’s a crowd.
A crowd of bobbies.
Lauralee.
On the ground.
Bloody.
My hands.
Bloody.
A knife.
Bloody.
What have I done?
I was influenced by this writing prompt. It was almost like it had e under its spell.
Paul Mansfield is a writer, a photographer, a guitar player, a philosopher — some he does well, some not so well, but he still tries them all.
You can follow him on Twitter @pmansfield.
Another of Paul’s stories based on a photograph he took is here.






