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Summary

"Tongue-Trippin" is a whimsical poem reflecting on a state of inebriation and the surreal nature of the world as perceived through that lens.

Abstract

The poem "Tongue-Trippin" captures a playful yet disoriented perspective, likely induced by alcohol, where the speaker is metaphorically at the "bottom of the barrel." The language is rich with alliteration and onomatopoeia, painting a vivid picture of a person stumbling, slipping, and sliding through a world that feels chaotic and nonsensical—a "scary-dairy" place. The speaker humorously asks for a glass of milk, suggesting a childlike innocence or perhaps a hangover cure, and the poem concludes with a light-hearted plea not to be judged for their state. The work is accompanied by a photograph that complements the theme of intoxication.

Opinions

  • The author seems to embrace a humorous and lighthearted approach to the theme of intoxication, avoiding a moralizing tone.
  • There is a sense of disorientation and playfulness in the speaker's perception of the world, indicated by phrases like "tip-trickin" and "Scootin on scuds."
  • The poem suggests that the speaker finds the world to be an overwhelming and bewildering place when inebriated, as implied by the term "scary-dairy world."
  • The request for milk could be interpreted as a desire for comfort or a return to simplicity, contrasting with the complexity of adult intoxication.
  • The speaker's request "Don’t look at me like that" implies a self-awareness of their condition and perhaps a touch of embarrassment or a plea for empathy.

Tongue-Trippin

A short poem.

At the bottom of the barrel I’m tongue trippin Shoulder-bumpin Wasted on words.

Toss me a toss-up, cus I’m tip-trickin Slick-slidin Scootin on scuds.

Hey, cross my heart and I’m comin-to. Cross my eyes, too, it’s a scary-dairy world out there.

Fetch me a milk, woulda? Don’t look at me like that.

Tongue-trippin. A short poem. Published in Byzantium no. 30. Photo by Erik Mclean on Unsplash
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