avatarA.H. Mehr

Summary

The poem "The Zeal" reflects on the journey of reaching for dreams with unyielding enthusiasm despite facing rejections and setbacks.

Abstract

"The Zeal" is a contemplative poem that delves into the emotional landscape of ambition and resilience. It begins by acknowledging the vulnerability one feels when clinging to any semblance of hope, even something as fragile as a straw. The poem progresses to describe the inflated sense of self-importance that temporary success can bring, leading to fantasies of grandeur and a desire for trust, loyalty, attention, affection, and respect. Despite the inevitable fall from these lofty heights, the poem emphasizes the speaker's enduring spirit, as they continue to face rejections with zeal, drawing inspiration from a quote by Sylvester Stallone that likens rejection to a bugle call to awaken and persevere.

Opinions

  • The poem suggests that even the smallest glimmer of hope can be perceived as a lifeline during times of vulnerability.
  • It critiques the human tendency to develop a false sense of importance and pride when momentarily successful.
  • The speaker longs for deep human connections, expressed through desires for trust, loyalty, attention, affection, and respect.
  • The poem portrays resilience in the face of rejection, framing it as a motivational force rather than a reason to retreat.
  • It conveys a philosophical acceptance of life's inevitable falls and disappointments, advocating for continued pursuit of one's goals despite them.
  • The poem implies that rejection should not be seen as a deterrent but rather as an integral part of the journey towards achieving one's dreams.

Poetry

The Zeal

A Poem

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Sometimes… You are vulnerable. Even a straw seems a lifeline. You reach out and catch hold of it. You aim for the moon and the stars.

Ofttimes… Because of the temporary lifeline you’ve got, you consider yourself essential and important. You have this phantasy and false pride about yourself.

Then… You wish for trust and loyalty. You crave for attention and affection. You just desire respect, a slight respect. You want an unconditional understanding.

And… You hang in there with lots of hope. You still aim for the moon and the stars.

Then… One fine day, like the wilted leaves of a tree, you fall from the amazing heights of your phantasy and false pride… Though you try to hang on as much as you can, you fall… You simply fall on the earth — confused, tossed and abandoned…

And thereon… for you….

Enduring rejections isn’t a big deal. Since you’ve done so all your life, you continue to do it with a Zeal.

Copyright © 2022 — A.H. Mehr

I take rejection as someone blowing a bugle in my ear to wake me up and get going, rather than retreat — Sylvester Stallone

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