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Summary

"The Water is Too Much" is a metaphorical poem reflecting on the overwhelming nature of life and the struggle to stay afloat amidst its challenges.

Abstract

The poem "The Water is Too Much" by Jonathan Greene delves into the existential metaphor of drowning in the vastness of the world. It conveys a sense of being overwhelmed by life's imperfections, depicted as water that one cannot swim in. The speaker feels like dead weight, unable to resist the pull of the water, which represents the world. Despite the water's anger and the speaker's initial inability to cope, there is a moment of acceptance and calm as the speaker realizes they are one with the water. The poem ends on a note of resignation, with the speaker acknowledging the futility of being saved from the vastness of the world.

Opinions

  • The author expresses a deep sense of being overwhelmed by life, likening it to being enveloped and unable to swim.
  • There is a palpable feeling of helplessness and passivity, as the speaker describes themselves as "dead weight."
  • The poem suggests that the world, like the water, is imperfect and can be a source of distress and turmoil.
  • A transition occurs from fear and anger towards the water to a realization of oneness with it, indicating a form of acceptance or surrender.
  • The vastness of the world is presented as both beautiful and sorrowful, as it is too immense to offer salvation to the individual.

The Water is Too Much

A Poem

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The water is too much as it envelops me in its arms I am dead weight and it is accepting

The water is the world and it’s slowly drowning me with its imperfection I can’t swim

The water is angry Holding me under The surface fades I am dead weight

The water is too much for this human to bear I am waterlogged and sinking fast

The water is the world Frenzied, but illogical But I am calm because I am the water

The water is sad because it’s just too vast to save me I am dead weight

© Jonathan Greene 2020

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