avatarM. MAHIR TAJWAR

Summary

A soldier experiences a range of emotions while waiting for a reunion with his beloved after returning from war.

Abstract

The poem "The Wait." captures the emotional journey of a soldier who is eagerly awaiting the arrival of his beloved after a prolonged separation due to war. The soldier's thoughts oscillate between concern over his appearance and the anticipation of being recognized by his love amidst a crowd. He reminisces about their shared love and the joy he feels knowing he will soon be reunited with his "princess." The moment of reunion is described as overwhelming, with the soldier's emotions culminating in a flood of tears as he is finally embraced by his beloved, who is likened to a "crowned queen." The poem concludes with an invitation for readers to share their connection with the poem's sentiments and their favorite lines.

Opinions

  • The soldier is anxious about his appearance and whether his beloved will recognize him after the time they've spent apart.
  • There is a sense of longing and nostalgia as the soldier reflects on the beauty of his beloved and the moments they've shared.
  • The soldier's joy is palpable as he anticipates the reunion, comparing his smile to the "half-cracked moon."
  • The moment of reunion is described in a way that emphasizes its emotional intensity, with the soldier's tears signifying the depth of his feelings.
  • The poem encourages reader engagement by asking them to reflect on their own experiences and reactions to the verse.

Poetry of Distance!

The Wait.

A soldier is waiting to see her beloved after returning from the war. How did he feel?

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Time has slowed down.. the wait is on This is the moment, I held up so long. So many faces, but I look around for you It has been months that our love is due.

How do I look, that’s worrying me a lot Will you be able to find me in this crowded spot? You are still pretty, aah! that I know I am waiting for those eyes where my love always glow.

While minutes have passed, and the wait is still on. I am only thinking, if you still know my song! Suddenly, I smiled like the half cracked moon, Good God, I am so happy, I will see my princess soon.

The minutes felt like ages, but finally you came down, Here I see my crowned queen wearing the angel’s gown. The sound of your steps bumped my beats.. My palm is sweating, no it’s not the summer’s heat.

You came close to me, gazed at my eyes, the intent was clear you want to hug me tight. This was the moment I waited so long, then it froze my tears of unfathomable tonnes!

Let me know whether you connected with the feeling of the poem and also your favourite lines from the poem. Cheers!

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