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id="ad22">But its good in the tum Compared to the second When your tongues numb Its such a bum</p><p id="8efd">That the first one Freezes your mouth And makes the whole popsicle go south</p><p id="e84b">The cold particle Is so bad So much so, The second lick will make you go mad!</p><blockquote id="9eb9"><p>Written by JS</p></blockquote><p id="8aef">This interesting poem was written entirely by my eleven-year-old son. Unlike the other couple pieces he’s written that I’ve recently had published, I did not do any editing on this one at all. This is the pure, unadulterated, mind of a child.</p><p id="9d01">If you’re interested in any more work from my son, here’s a poem he w

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rote about being sick:</p><div id="b120" class="link-block"> <a href="https://readmedium.com/how-i-feel-d7dfafdc172e"> <div> <div> <h2>How I Feel</h2> <div><h3>A Poem About Being Sick</h3></div> <div><p>medium.com</p></div> </div> <div> <div style="background-image: url(https://miro.readmedium.com/v2/resize:fit:320/1*T-hJ4Gbp3d8UArB63Wcg6A.jpeg)"></div> </div> </div> </a> </div><p id="4bad">I edited a few punctuation and capitalization parts on that one, but it’s all him besides that.</p></article></body>

The Second Lick of a Popsicle

A poem about how bad the second lick of a popsicle is

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The first is ice It tastes like mice And thats not nice

But its good in the tum Compared to the second When your tongues numb Its such a bum

That the first one Freezes your mouth And makes the whole popsicle go south

The cold particle Is so bad So much so, The second lick will make you go mad!

Written by JS

This interesting poem was written entirely by my eleven-year-old son. Unlike the other couple pieces he’s written that I’ve recently had published, I did not do any editing on this one at all. This is the pure, unadulterated, mind of a child.

If you’re interested in any more work from my son, here’s a poem he wrote about being sick:

I edited a few punctuation and capitalization parts on that one, but it’s all him besides that.

Poetry
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Food
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