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Summary

"The Promised Oasis" is a poignant poem that reflects on the bittersweet journey of motherhood, capturing the protective instincts and hopes of a mother as her child grows and explores the world.

Abstract

"The Promised Oasis" is a touching poem from Sana Rose's collection 'Songs of Motherhood,' which delves into the emotional landscape of motherhood. The poem encapsulates the delicate balance between a mother's desire to protect her child and the inevitability of the child's independent exploration. It portrays the tender moments of a child's discovery and the unspoken promise of home as a sanctuary amidst life's challenges. The poem emphasizes the author's wish for her child to proceed fearlessly into the future while cherishing the present, fleeting moments of innocence and wonder.

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  • The author expresses a mix of apprehension and pride as she watches her child strive for independence.
  • There is a sense of nostalgia for the child's early milestones and the simple joys of discovery, like experiencing raindrops.
  • The poem conveys an unwavering commitment to providing comfort and safety, likening the mother to an oasis that will always be there for the child.
  • The author acknowledges the inevitability of the child facing hardships but reassures the child of her constant presence and support.
  • Sana Rose's professional background as a physician, counseling professional, and mother deeply informs the empathetic and nurturing tone of the poem.

The Promised Oasis

A poem from my collection ‘Songs of Motherhood’

Photo by Monika Pot on Unsplash

Fear grips my heart when your dimpled knuckles grip the window bars; you are taking a glance at the wonders outside.

And darling, that's the first step - let me hold you for now while you pull yourself up to your tiny-toed feet, for, once you step out, there's no coming back.

Life runs forward, so will you; that's what I want for you, a fearless proceeding. And yet, here I am, nervously watching you try against gravity.

Here I am, cherishing the moment you discovered raindrops from nowhere, rippling puddles. Here, I stay still, while your eyes wander in endless wonder, seeking passions beyond my arms.

But a nest is a nest, always; a promise always a promise... Home is where you would curl up when the world hurts you; yes, that's inevitable, but fret not - here, I am yet again, arms open...

I am the oasis you'll always find in the endless deserts of life.

© Sana Rose 2020

Written on May 26th, 2015, in my collection ‘Songs of Motherhood’.

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Sana Rose is an award-nominated novelist, poet, physician, counseling professional, freelance writer and mom. She is based out of Kerala, India. Her debut women’s fiction novel Sandcastles was shortlisted for ARL Literary Awards 2018 for Best Author soon after publication.

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