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"The Hiking Trip" is a free verse poem by Lori Carlson that captures the essence of connecting with nature through a hiking journey.

Abstract

The poem "The Hiking Trip" by Lori Carlson, featured on Medium's publication "a Few Words," is a lyrical narrative that encapsulates the intimate experience of a hiker with the natural world. The poem describes the hiker's journey from sleeping under the stars to interacting with the mountain, river, and wildflowers, culminating in a serene farewell as the trip concludes. Carlson's words paint a vivid picture of the sensory and emotional immersion one feels when spending time in nature, emphasizing the tranquility and harmony that such an experience can bring. The poem is a celebration of the simple yet profound joys of outdoor adventures and the beauty of the natural landscape.

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  • The poet expresses a deep connection with nature, using metaphorical language to describe the hiker's interactions with the environment.
  • The poem conveys a sense of peace and contentment derived from being in nature, suggesting that such experiences are both rejuvenating and enchanting.
  • The author seems to view nature as a nurturing force, providing comfort and inspiration, as

The Hiking Trip

A Free Verse Poem — Spending Time with Nature

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We make blankets out of moon beams and cradle our heads among the stars As the last embers of fire flickers and dies we sleep upon the mountain’s back When morning arrives, we pull on sun rays and trek down the mountain We dance with the river — weaving about and gently caress it in the palms of our hands At Midday, we roll patches of wildflowers into pillows and curl into the mountain’s belly We watch as clouds smile for us until nature’s song lulls us into an afternoon nap Evening comes and ends our trip we pack our gear into the truck and toss nature back to the mountain like a painting for someone else’s delight

©2020 Lori Carlson. All rights reserved

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Lori Carlson writes poetry, fiction, articles and personal essays. Most of her topics are centered around Relationships, Spirituality, Life Lessons, Mental Health, and the LGBTQ+ community. She currently writes for Loose Words,💜POM💜 , Illumination, The Friday Fix, House of Haiku, Know Thyself, Heal Thyself, The Purple Pen, Blue Insights, a Few Words, Invisible Illness and Tempest in Under 1000

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