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Summary

The provided text is a poignant personal narrative about the author's experience of adopting a daughter who was once a scared, homeless teenager, and how their bond evolved into a profound mutual love and hope.

Abstract

The narrative titled "Shortform Theme / Falling in Love" introduces the story of the author's adopted daughter. It paints a vivid picture of a young girl, around 16 years old, who appears much younger due to the hardships she has faced. Homeless and scared, she is initially frightened of the author, who would later offer her a permanent home. The girl's beauty and sadness touch the author, who recognizes her as the daughter they never knew they needed. As they both escape their pasts, their relationship becomes one of deep love and mutual dependency, entering the author's second half-century with a newfound sense of hope and belonging. The piece is a reflection on unexpected love and the transformative power of familial bonds.

Opinions

  • The author expresses a deep emotional connection with the girl, describing her as the love they were seeking without realization.
  • There is a sense of responsibility and protectiveness towards the girl, who is depicted as vulnerable and in need of stability and care.
  • The narrative suggests that love can arise in unexpected forms and at unexpected times, emphasizing the transformative impact of their relationship on the author's life.
  • The author acknowledges the initial fear and hesitation but highlights the growth and strength found in their shared journey towards healing and building a family.
  • The girl's influence on the author is portrayed as significant, shaping the author's perspective on love and parenthood.

Shortform Theme / Falling in Love

The Girl

my adopted daughter story

Photo by DIEGO SANCHEZ on Unsplash

You were 16 looking 12 maturity stunted by cruelty

Homeless but for a couch in an apartment not yours

Scared as the proverbial rabbit skittering away in shadows

Frightened of me, the one who would one day give you a home

Not that day but one day after nights haunted by your dark eyes

You were beautiful in your sadness luminescent in your fear

You were the daughter I didn’t know I needed or wanted or would have

You were my future when we both fled our pasts

You were my hope when we both held so little

We entered my second half-century clinging to each other

You were the love I was looking for and didn’t know it

© Dennett 2021

In response to How Old Were You When You First Fell in Love?

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