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Summary

The poem "The Cracks in the Pavement" by Jonathan Greene reflects on the metaphorical significance of the cracks in the pavement, symbolizing hidden secrets, dreams, and the universe.

Abstract

The poem "The Cracks in the Pavement" by Jonathan Greene uses the imagery of pavement cracks to delve into themes of isolation, hidden struggles, and the interconnectedness of life. It portrays the cracks as repositories for dreams and secrets, suggesting a desire to escape into them rather than face the world. The poem also likens the cracks to a metaphor for the universe, with its imperfections and stubbornness to resist repair, highlighting the resilience and complexity of human existence.

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  • The author expresses a longing to escape through the cracks, not to die, but to live unnoticed, indicating a desire for solitude or a break from reality.
  • The cracks are depicted as hiding places for our deepest secrets, suggesting that even in public spaces, we carry private burdens.
  • The poem conveys a sense of isolation, with individuals standing on their own cracks, akin to islands on asphalt, emphasizing the disconnect between people.
  • The cracks are used as a metaphor for the universe, with the world being interconnected yet fractured, and resistant to change or healing.
  • There is a sense of stubbornness in the refusal to fix the cracks, perhaps reflecting a human tendency to hold onto flaws rather than confront and mend them.

The Cracks in the Pavement

A Poem

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The cracks in the pavement are where my dreams go to die and sometimes my only wish is that I could slip through those cracks but not because I want to die, along with my dreams, but because I want to see what it’s like to fall through the cracks and live the rest of my life unnoticed

The cracks in the pavement hide all of our secrets and when I see you crouch down I know that you are unloading the worst of them into the crevice where you hide the others A lockbox of hidden disease just one layer down from being uncovered

The cracks in the pavement are what separates me from you as you stand on your crack and I stand on mine Islands on asphalt daring each other to float away like lilypads on a pond except we are concrete and we will sink

The cracks in the pavement are a metaphor for the universe A whole still standing together but cracked in every spot, held together by strands and in need of full repair but still, too stubborn to acquiesce to being fixed and there we remain, those same cracks in the pavement

© Jonathan Greene 2020

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