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Summary

"The Countdown" is an erotic poem by Jupiter Grant that explores themes of dominance and submission, as a dominant partner controls the timing of the submissive's orgasm.

Abstract

"The Countdown" is a poem that delves into the power dynamics of a BDSM relationship, where the dominant partner, referred to as "Master," exerts control over the submissive's, or "Pet's," sexual release. The poem unfolds as a narrative of sexual tension and anticipation, with the Master teasing and edging the submissive, building up to a climactic release. The submissive's pleas for release are met with the Master's calculated delay, emphasizing the themes of control, trust, and the heightened pleasure that can come from withholding gratification. The poem is part of a larger collection titled "Poe-rotica: 101 Saucy and Erotic Poems" by Jupiter Grant, available on Amazon Kindle, Audible audiobook, and as part of the "Interplanetary Quartet" bundle.

Opinions

  • The poem conveys a positive view of BDSM relationships, highlighting the intensity and connection that can arise from power exchange.
  • The Master's control over the submissive's orgasm is presented as a form of praise and reward for the submissive's patience and obedience.
  • The submissive's experience is portrayed as one of heightened pleasure, despite the frustration and anticipation caused by the delayed climax.
  • The poem suggests that the Master derives pleasure not only from their own satisfaction but also from the control and teasing aspect of the encounter.
  • The use of a countdown adds a layer of suspense and structure to the sexual experience, enhancing the erotic tension.
  • The poem implies that the submissive's surrender and the resulting orgasm are significant moments of vulnerability and intimacy within the power exchange dynamic.
  • The Master's post-climactic affection reinforces the caring aspect of the dominant role, emphasizing the aftercare and emotional connection in BDSM practices.

The Countdown

Your orgasm is mine…

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“May I have permission,” asks the girl.

He responds “not yet,

I’ve told you, this is punishment,

You’ve been a naughty Pet.

I deprive you of the right to come,

Until I say it’s time.

I’ll count you down to your climax,

Your orgasm is mine.”

The girl responds with strangled moan,

The peak is getting near,

She needs release but it’s denied,

Her Master’s made that clear.

She must endure his edging game,

To prove that she is good.

To give him her submission now

Just like a good Pet should.

His fingers tease and tickle,

He’s relishing this game

To see her writhe and wriggle

Sets his pounding heart aflame.

He senses her frustration,

And knows she’s set to burst,

He’ll let her come, eventually,

But he’ll make her suffer first.

With hardened length he enters her,

And feels her body squirm.

His fingers stroke between her legs,

His thrusts are brisk and firm.

Her flesh is warm and silky and

Her body is on fire.

He lifts her legs around his waist,

Increasing her desire.

She bucks and hollers, “Master, please!

I can’t wait anymore.”

With a wicked grin her Dom replies,

“Impatient little whore.”

He grabs her breast and pinches her

And makes her body wriggle.

She looks so wild and helpless that

He cannot help but giggle.

“My little Pet, oh what a sight

You are in all your quaking!”

She can’t respond, she’s too far gone.

Entire body shaking.

Her lover smiles and ups the pace,

His strokes are coming faster.

The woman shouts and begs and pleads,

“Oh, please let me come, Master!”

He starts the countdown, five to nought.

She feels the pressure rise,

Her nipples are like pebbles

And she’s wet between her thighs.

“Five,” he starts. She holds her breath,

While friction he increases.

Four comes next, and with a groan

Her breath she now releases.

Now it’s three, and she begins

To see relief approaching.

She feels the pulsing deep inside

As her climax is encroaching.

Two seconds left, and Master is

Enjoying her undoing.

His lust-bright eyes are fixed on her

As the torture is ensuing.

One second now, he presses harder

On her aching clit.

“Now,” he says. Her body shakes,

She screams out “Holy shit!!”

The climax rends her inside out,

She’s soaring in the air.

And when it’s over, Master coos

And gently strokes her hair.

“Good girl,” he whispers, “I’m impressed,

You’ve been a pliant Pet,

But don’t you get too comfortable,

I’m not done with you yet!”

The Countdown is taken from “Poe-rotica: 101 Saucy and Erotic Poems” by Jupiter Grant. Available on Amazon Kindle, Audible audiobook, or as a part of the bundle “Interplanetary Quartet #: A Collection of Four Titles from Jupiter”, also available on Kindle or Audiobook (US / UK / FR/ DE)

Jupiter Grant is a self published author, blogger, narrator and audiobook producer.

Enquiries and comments are always welcome. You can also find me on Twitter @GrantJupiter

Also by Jupiter:

Erotica
Poetry
BDSM
Kink
Orgasm
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