avatarRayna Pummel

Summary

The article reflects on the divergent experiences of individuals in their spiritual practice, emphasizing that the effectiveness of prayer is influenced by one's perception and attitude.

Abstract

The piece titled "The Correct Prayer" delves into the spiritual journeys of individuals, noting that many people pray without feeling heard or fulfilled, leading to a crisis of faith and self-worth. However, the author observes a transformative shift when individuals approach prayer with genuine openness, gratitude, and presence, which aligns with the concept that one's reality is as joyful as they allow it to be. The narrative contrasts two men in the same church—one losing faith and the other leaving with a smile—to illustrate that happiness and the perception of answered prayers are deeply personal and dependent on individual perspective, despite similar circumstances.

Opinions

  • Prayer without the right mindset can lead to feelings of defeat and a lack of fulfillment.
  • Self-esteem and personal value are questioned when prayers seem unanswered.
  • A genuine and open-hearted approach to prayer can lead to a more positive spiritual experience.
  • The perception of reality, including happiness and answered prayers, is subjective and varies greatly among individuals.
  • The author suggests that a mindful presence and gratitude are key to noticing the benefits of prayer.
  • The article implies that external circumstances do not dictate one's spiritual satisfaction; rather, it is an individual choice.

The Correct Prayer

Spiritually Prompted Response

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I have watched many men kneel and pray.

Beg, plead, and ask for so many things.

Yet they walk through life defeated,

Always perplexed by their vision of

Asking but never recieving.

Am I not loved?

Am I not good enough?

Self-esteem begins the journey to depletion,

Value, along with it, is constantly questioned.

Faith becomes hollow,

Prayers begin to feel tedious and empty.

These men are on the road of the non-believing.

I’ve seen fallen men broken and crying,

Speak words into thin air,

Candidly to a higher being,

They had no knowledge of existing.

Ready to surrender, ready to listen, and see.

In their hearts is a willingness

Words echoing with a rare genuinity.

Expectations replaced with appreciation.

These men have a different kind of vision.

Not looking in the past nor to far ahead.

Mindfully in the moment,

Answered prayers become easily noticed.

In the same church one man loses his fath,

Another walks away wearing smile across his face.

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You see, the world we live in

Only exists as we pervceive it

Man’s happiness is that of his own choosing.

Two people can come from the same path,

Exact same resources, desires and needs.

Yet we watch them live out two very different stories.

How can that be?

It’s all in the way you choose to see.

Reality is only as joyful as you allow it to be.

Ravyne Hawke Marcus aka Gregory Maidman

Response to Spirtual Prompt! I absolutely loved it!!!! Thank you so much for the inspiration. I hope you enjoy my response! I have added the link to the prompt article should anyone who reads be as inspired as I by it!!

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