avatarTodd B Harrington

Summary

James falls into a deep sleep after a taxing day and dreams of police finding a body in a plastic bag, unknowingly sharing his name, while a TV newscast in the background eerily mirrors his surreal experience.

Abstract

In "The Body Bag…" by Todd B. Harrington, the protagonist, James, drifts into a restless sleep after enduring the stress of the day, only to find himself experiencing a profoundly deep sleep that borders on a coma. In this dreamlike state, he becomes aware of a sensation of being pulled and pushed, accompanied by unfamiliar voices and a twinge of pain. The atmosphere then shifts to an unsettling calm, as he hears a television newscast reporting the discovery of a body in a plastic bag, identified as a local man named James. This 100-word drabble leaves the reader contemplating the thin line between reality and dreams.

Opinions

  • The author, Todd B. Harrington, crafts a suspenseful narrative that plays with the audience's perception of consciousness and reality.

    • James' journey into sleep is depicted through descriptive language, leading readers to question what's real and what isn't.
  • The abrupt introduction of a news broadcast declaring the discovery of James' namesake corpse serves as a dissonant twist, confronting the reader with mortality and the unexpected interruption of life's seemingly mundane routines.

  • The piece is open to interpretation, inviting readers to ponder over the nature of the character's experience, and whether it is purely a dream or a commentary on the fragility and unpredictability of life.

The Body Bag…

I must be dreaming

(Photo by Author, © Todd B Harrington)

After a long and stressful day James quickly drifts off into a fitful sleep while watching TV.

In his sleep he thinks, “Why so much tugging and pulling, tossing and turning. A sudden twitch of pain. Distant voices I don’t recognize. Feels like a struggle.”

Then the sleep becomes so deep. Almost too deep.

All suddenly becomes peaceful. Almost too peaceful.

James, in his coma like sleep, thinks he must be dreaming.

On the TV in the background: “Police have recovered a body wrapped in a plastic bag they have identified as a local man by the name of James.”

Note: This is a drabble. (100 Words)

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