three dodoitsu — Japanese poetic form
Thank you, Winston the Stick
if sticks can bloom so can barren we

“This is the lesson: never give in, never give in, never, never, never, never — in nothing, great or small, large or petty — never give in except to convictions of honour and good sense.” Winston Churchill
Watering a barren stick day after day after day I stopped paying attention My hose soldiered on
Watering a stick? Senseless except one night the stick bloomed… such succulent instruction! Savor miracles
Winston’s fattened with power, every pup so eloquent – and how he loves a good joke! My soul laughs thank you’s
©Jenine Bsharah Baines 2021
Winston Churchill has fascinated me forever. His courage, his out-of-the-box thinking, his eccentricity, his battle with depression (which he called “the black dog”), his love of painting, his astonishing facility with words, his wit, his ability to inspire, his loyalty.
So when the sad succulent — truly a stick — I stuck in the ground actually birthed pups after months and months and months of what felt like a lost cause, I knew I had to christen him “Winston.”
Winston has taught me an invaluable lesson. This poem is my thank you note.
Oh — I almost forgot! Dodoitsu is like haiku or tanka, except it’s four lines with this syllabic pattern: 7/7/7/5
I picked a Japanese poetic form because I know Trista Signe Ainsworth loves Japan…and this is my maiden submission to her new publication, Thank You Notes.
Thank you, Trista. You have taught me so much since we met via Medium. Ditto, dearest readers. Thank you for your support, comments, and love. I pray I return these to you one hundredfold!






