avatarAimée Brown Gramblin

Summary

Two childhood friends, nicknamed Peanut Butter and Jelly, share a poignant farewell as one prepares to move away, reminiscent of a game of Tetris.

Abstract

The story titled "Tetris" is a 100-word microfiction piece that captures a moment of departure between two close friends. Peanut Butter, a lanky boy with long brown hair, and Jelly, a girl with a bald head and eyeliner, sit on the porch steps reflecting on their deep bond, which began in early childhood. Their fathers were best friends, linking their families. As Jelly, whose real name is Sophie, confronts the reality of her friend Paul's imminent move, her genuine feelings of sadness surface. The scene is juxtaposed with the image of Sophie's dad closing the moving truck as if he had neatly completed a game of Tetris, symbolizing the end of an era and the careful packing of memories and relationships.

Opinions

  • The story evokes a sense of nostalgia and the bittersweet nature of change.
  • The nicknames "Peanut Butter" and "Jelly" suggest a playful and endearing relationship between the friends.
  • The father's action of closing the moving truck, likened to winning a game of Tetris, implies a sense of accomplishment and finality in the moving process, which may contrast with the children's emotions.
  • The use of the Tetris metaphor hints at the complexities of life and relationships, where fitting pieces together perfectly is both a challenge and a reward.
  • The story may imply that even in the face of change, life goes on, and people find ways to move forward, just as one would in a game of Tetris.

Tetris

100 Word Microfiction

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The other kids called them Peanut Butter and Jelly. Peanut Butter was fourteen. He was lanky with long brown hair. Jelly turned fifteen next week. Her head was bald and she wore eyeliner.

Peanut Butter and Jelly knew each other from the time they were in diapers. Their dads were best friends.

They sat together on the front porch steps at Jelly’s house, looking down at cracked cement.

Jelly gulped, “I’m gonna miss you, Paul.” It was the truth.

Sophie’s dad pulled the door of the moving truck closed. It looked like he’d just won a game of Tetris.

“Goodbye.”

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