avatarNikolaos Skordilis

Summary

The text is a poetic reflection on a tumultuous emotional journey, where the speaker's initial fear of their intense passion subsides, yet the passion itself remains, directed towards a person named Tähti, and is expressed through the metaphor of transforming a tempest into a tranquil sea.

Abstract

The poem titled "Tempest" under the category of VSS365 | POETRY delves into the depths of overwhelming desire and fear. Initially, the speaker is consumed by a lust so intense that it instills fear of a violent end. However, the fear dissipates, leaving behind the enduring passion. This passion, once a source of trepidation, is now seen as something that can be calmed by the presence of a loved one, Tähti. The speaker expresses a hope that this person can transform their inner turmoil into peace. The poem concludes with a declaration of love in Finnish, "Minä rakastan sinua Tähti," which translates to "I love you, Tähti," and a credit to the image used, taken by Antonios Ntoumas, alongside an invitation to subscribe to the author's stories.

Opinions

  • The speaker expresses a profound transformation from fearing their passion to embracing it, suggesting a personal growth or acceptance.
  • There is an intense emotional connection with the person addressed as Tähti, who is seen as a source of potential calm and redemption.
  • The use of the tempest and tranquil sea metaphor indicates the speaker's desire for emotional stability and peace, which they believe Tähti can provide.
  • The inclusion of a Finnish love declaration adds a layer of intimacy and specificity to the poem, hinting at a personal relationship with someone who may be Finnish or connected to Finland.
  • The poem is part of the VSS365 challenge, indicating the author's participation in a daily writing exercise, which emphasizes their commitment to the craft of poetry and brevity in storytelling.

VSS365 | POETRY

Tempest

In the boundless sea I was lost overwhelmed by my lust for thee I feared my violent delight would have a violent end

Then I lost that fear I am free of it but not lust only you I think

Can soothe the lust in me turn it from a tempest to a tranquil Sea

Minä rakastan sinua Tähti

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Image by Antonios Ntoumas from Pixabay

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