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The website content is a personal and reflective poem titled "Sweetbriar," dedicated to the author's mother, juxtaposing the mother's vibrant character and resilience with the author's own feelings of being different and wild in their own way.

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"Sweetbriar" is a poignant poem by Esther Jones that pays homage to her mother, comparing her to a wild rose. The poem describes the mother's strength and beauty through the metaphor of a prairie rose that is both sweet and untamed, with the potential to produce rosehips, symbolizing the bittersweet nature of life. The author expresses admiration and a deep personal connection, wishing to emulate her mother's qualities. However, she acknowledges that she is different, describing herself as seedless and infertile, yet still wild. The poem is interspersed with images and acknowledgments of borrowed phrases from another poem, "Maternal Love Blooms," by ChatGPT. Esther Jones, identified as a Canadian queer Christian poet, invites readers to support her work through a 'Buy me a coffee' link.

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  • The author holds her mother in high regard, viewing her as a role model and a source of inspiration.
  • There is a sense of longing to be like her mother, coupled with an acknowledgment of inherent differences.
  • The author seems to grapple with feelings of inadequacy or difference, as suggested by the terms "seedless," "barren," and "infertile."
  • The poem conveys a complex mix of admiration, nostalgia, and a quest for self-identity.
  • The use of a wild rose as a metaphor suggests the author's appreciation for natural beauty and resilience.
  • By citing the source of the borrowed phrases, the author respects the

Let’s Get Real

Sweetbriar — a poem for Mom

She was a wild rose

Image by author

I wanted to be just like her: My mom, my hero: superstar

Each spring, I chose an early prairie rose — a bloom in vibrant hue, a common wild pink eglantine, a pasture rose, a wood rose, a sweetbriar — ‘mong blossoms kissed by sun’s sweet lips, and offered it to her.

Untamed and sweet with sudden barbs, If left alone, produce rosehips: Bittersweet and full of seeds.

She withered without rain and sun. I wonder if she sees me now, I wonder if she’s proud.

I am not like her. I’ll never be like her. I’m seedless, barren, infertile, But I am also wild.

Image by ❄️♡💛♡❄️ Julita ❄️♡💛♡❄️ from Pixabay

The words in italics in my tribute poem to Mom were borrowed from ChatGPT’s poem, Maternal Love Blooms — see Paper Poetry’s ‘Let’s Get Real’ prompt for details —

Esther learned to read when she was four years old, and began writing shortly thereafter. She is a Canadian queer Christian poet, crafting with words to create art and music.

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